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Ment to be

When I first laid eyes on you,
I htought, "I have no chance."
Now I know better.
Being with you,
Make my life worth while.
Knowing it won't end,
Makes it easier to share my love.
You and I,
Never would have stayed...
Just friends,
Why?, you ask,
Because we are soul mate,
We were ment to be.

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I started this poem so many years ago, it wasn't until today that I could finish it.  My husband brings out my happier side, and now I can put my happiness into my poetry instead of always sad poems.  Hope you enjoy.
Written April 1st, 2003

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  • dittysri silver member
    April 10, 2003
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    Good piece ++

    What a wonderful statement for true love, Such devotion brings a tear of happiness to my eye. I too had just such a soul mate until the angels came and carried her home to be with the Holy Father. Evenso, I will love her forever. Good write!
    You might want to edit line 1, maybe no.
    Edited on Apr 10, 12:56 because 'error in spelling'.

  • sweets
    April 8, 2003
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    i really enjoyed this poem. I know how it feels not to able to finsh a poem until you find someone who knows you love them and you love them back. great write. thanks for your comment. ~sweets~

  • sarra
    April 8, 2003
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    This is wonderful, full of love! I hope one day I find someone who is my soul mate...though sometimes I think I have, he's just got a girlfriend, ah, well, thats life, eh?


  • Ginabells
    April 4, 2003
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    sweet

    Sweet, And thank you for the comment you left for my daughter(on divorce)
    Its been hard on us all.

    Gina