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From Heartbreak to Hope

Stuck at a crossroad and my pen is out of ink
My keys are matted to the board

and I can't seem to think

there is so much to explore
however, mere interpretation is plagued

try as I may to resume
the translation returns vague

what are the correct words
whats the appropriate phrase

my heart is aching
my mind is at a gaze

so now i must rely on the sweat of the pain
that drenches this very soul

incorporate each instance
this becomes a new goal

borrow little droplets to add to my pen
words gather quickly
images enter in

heartache no longer prolonged
with the production of each letter

a therapeutic lesson emerges
and somehow I feel a little better


Author notes

This is how I resolved the block was recently plagued with, as best as I can explain it.
Written July 14th, 2006

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  • Hallie Kavanagh
    July 14, 2006
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    I agree with you... somehow, when you write, you feel all better


  • elemental angel
    July 14, 2006
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    Wonderful expression, I really enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for entering and good luck in my contest


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    July 14, 2006
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    I am trying to come out of a block right now...Things swirl around my head but cant seem to get them on paper...This was a great piece and it just might be what I need to get the ideas in my head unto paper..or pc...lol
    Thanks for sharing.

    Soulful Woman


  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    July 14, 2006
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    I love it, especially the descriptive words you used so well to express what transpired here... "plague" and "matted" instead of usual, everyday words


  • LegalEagle
    July 14, 2006
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    good job

    a good spin on things here. it is a nice write. good tone, clear to read. easy to u nderstand. an overall good job on this one. :-)

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