I hope you rot in hell
I hate you and hope you rot in hell
You’re useless and your feet smell
Two children you helped create
8 years later for maintenance I still wait
Forever moaning you got no money
But for beer there is enough, how funny
Sex with you was so pathetic
Unfulfilling and ascetic
Leaving me empty never satisfied
In a woman’s arms happiness I did find
You are nothing more than a useless appendage
And in my opinion you belong in the garbage
I hate you so much I wish you would die
To my kids never tell another lie
Your wife I thought was really sweet
Till she proved she was full of deceit
The two of you deserve each other
Now shoo, go cry on the shoulder of your mother
Fuck off out all of our lives
Before I stick you full of knives
Author notes
this is lovingly dedicated to my ex husband and his loving wife: Paul Stephen Drake and Tammy Drake.... may they die and rot in hell
"Be systematically ascetic...do...something for no other reason than that you would rather not do it- William James"
Written July 14th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- hate someone? by Armoured Heart.
300 points, ended October 9, 2006, 53 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HATE by lesbian-in-love.
565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Awesome, I loved it....You have got me all fired up and wanting to go kick my ex-husbands ass...
Sex with you was so pathetic,
Unfulfilling and ascetic...........
The two of you deserve eachother,
Now shoo, go cry on the shoulder of your mother.....
Man, I am so jelouse I didn't come up with this! This poem rocks. Please, if you get a chance see my poem "Even" ....its my scumbag ex-husband story. Thanks for a great read!
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LOL writing hate poetry about my ex is easy.
im on my way to check out your poem.
ang
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Wow. Very well written. I can feel the hate. My ex gf's stepdad is who came to mind when i read this. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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thanks for the encouragement
i totally cannot stand my children's father, he is a real dickhead!!!
in the 10 years that i have been divorced from him my g/f (now my wife) has supported my kids. To get anything from their father is like pulling teeth. personally i think root canal is a less anoying prospect LOL.
ang
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Angie,
It is a pity that P&T can't actually bring themselves to help. You know I would do more if I could because the kids are not to blame for the shit their parents get into.
As for the poem, I loved it all but particularly liked ...
"You are nothing more than a useless appendage
And in my opinion you belong in the garbage"
~hugs~
YLexM -
curse him as much as you like and want to, the more the merrier, the only way i can get any response from him or financial help is by humiliating him..... hey perhaps thats why im so good at humiliation play!!!
ang -
Darling SS
Your gold award rant
really burned his pants
may I also yell
cursing him feels swell.
Smoosh
Janet -
dankie Ami,
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EXCELLENT, YOU DESERVED TO WIN!!
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thank you for your wonderful reply. my son has realised that his dad is a loser and accepts that. my daughter still sees her father as the best thing since ice cream, i dont doubt that she will eventually see the light. until such time i/we plod along and do our best
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A write which seethes with emotion,this is raw,punchy and direct.Written without the cloak of metaphor as the errant ex needs not words to be held in a moments thought but rather revealed in a moments thought as herein.
I hope the write was cathartic and helped exorcise your feelings.The best revenge is success.Somehow us women left by guys that have no morals,ethics or sense of personal responsibility manage simply because we have too.
Yes,we have the worries,the responsibility and the bills to meet but we also have the joys,the laughter and the hearts of our children.Children learn more by actions than by words.Whatever is said by us or their fathers now will be rationalized as they age and understand that it was us who held their hands through their tears and triumphs.
My eldest son put it in his own words recently when he said "Mum,you drove me nuts by being to caring and protective and I used to resent it but thankyou,I am who I am because of you and though I wanted Dad to be there and care I realize it is his loss that he wasn't"
By being happy,by doing your best for your family and yourself you are being successful.Good luck in the contest,love and light,Yvette
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dankie Tessa ek wardeer your kommentaar (sp)
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thank yo for your comment blueyez iv managed without their help for 8 years, but enough is enough, my eldest just started high school and i cant do it alone!
anyway thanks again for commenting
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wow much props! Very storng words! I am lucky I dont' have issues with my ex about my kids but I am sorry that not only is he an ass but you have to putup with his bitch too! Keep your head up girl cuz I can see you are the stronger one!
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Ang
Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest
My Vriendin
Jy het definitief al die emosies uitgebring wat ek gesoek het...
So thumbs up vir jou met die werk...
Dankie dat jy dit met my gedeel het
Excellent
Tessa -
rant as much as you want! i'v done it on other comments and im not offended, its a strange world we live in when the courts decide that one person is better off than another regardlesss of what they are or are not using, drinking abusing.... and of course what they are offering the presiding 'judge'!!!!!
anyway thanks for the comment
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thank you s much for your comment, although i have to admit, this is just the 'tip of the iceberg' of how i feel!!!
ang -
You definitely expressed your anger well! My sons father is a loser too, but I try to make up for it. He pays child support but the last two years has managed to get it decreased. My sister's ex is a pathetic loser, and when you talk about crying on the shoulder of his mother, holy shit, is that him...right now "he" is suing my sister for custody for his parents (well, his mother) bitch, I hate her. She is using him (her son)to get custody and think no one notices that this is all about her, he would never in a million years want custody if it wasn't for her, controlling selfish bitch. She lies and will hurt ANYONE to get what she wants. Anyway, so far, the courts have been ruling in "his" favor at the same time recommending that he take anger management classes and alcoholics anonymous...my sister has NO issues emotionally or chemically...what is wrong with this picture.
Sorry for my rant...your words stirred up the emotion and I think they are along the same lines...jerks.
GREAT piece of work here, I need to work on trying to write some angry stuff to vent with!
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Great write! So sorry for what you've gone through because of him. But nice job getting the words down. I felt the hate with you, the disgust. You did exactly what the contest was for. Good luck to you!
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thank you MBL, your comment is so greatly appreciated
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AWESOME!!!!!!!
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LOL i put their names up for a reason, i hope they do come accross the poem coz then they can see just how much i really do hate them both. I have been raising both kids without him helping financially, but right now i cant do it anymore, i cant pay for schooling and everything alone anymore, or expect my partner to keep coughing up. My ex boyfriend still has us ALL (3 kids and myself) on his medical aid....... my ex hubby is not worth the piece of paper his birth certificate is printed on.
i apologise for ranting on like this but hell i need to get it out.
thanks for your comment, it is appreciated.
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he he, well it was easy to write because of how much i despise him
ang -
thank you Elizabeth
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ooooppps you shouldn't put there names on this piece as you have hell you could nearly be sued with what you have placed in writing hope they don't see it , I feel your anger and hate very strongly take it from some-one that wasted half her life being bitter about the same thing youare there not worth it I raised 4 great kids on my own we are all very close and they had no father cause he didn't want them its hard emotionally I know and yes you need to get it out and writing is excellent therapy thats why i write too. please take-care he is loosing out not you and the children need your love not a mans hate. all will be fine
angel
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You really showed full emotions here.
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Brilliant expression. I think this is really well written you allow your reader to definatly feel the anger and hurt you feel but there is humourous feel aswell which I personally think is great. Well done and keep up the good work.
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lol he he, thank you SnugglyOrange.
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LMAO I think in this poem you have summed up a feeling that most women feel after a nasty divorce/being shunned by an ignorant man...my momma complains about maintenence all the time...you go girl!!
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thank you for your comment i really do not like the man he is a waste of ....................
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Well you certainly got your point across! nice poem, agressive and really showing your 'true emotions' good luck in the contest
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LOL! Well written!
A moving tribute!
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