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Zizou

Today we aknowledge a terrible lost
A celebration in the 9th of july at a terrible cost
The wind of change once more blew
And time over a person once more grew
A living king in death to become a legend
A career that red was there to offend
Yet the memory of him lives in his squad
Today a nation won the world, but the world lost a god...

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Written July 14th, 2006

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  • Whiplash
    July 3, 2007
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    I don't know who Zizou is either. I think that this is a really great poem. It is a glorious and touching tribute that anyone would be glad to receive. I love the line "A living king in death to become a legend" It is one that could be attributed to many significant people and it is a beautiful sentiment.


  • Gvn
    July 24, 2006
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    'Today a nation won the world, but the world lost a god..." Beautiful line.. it really sums up your poem. No I dont exactly know who Zizou is and I dont know what lobotomy means (lol, reading comment) so I cant exactly understand this poem perfectly. But I get the gist of it; I think its great.

  • City wolf
    July 14, 2006
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    f-u-c-k yeah, oh, and for those who don't know who Zizou is, get a f-u-c-k-i-n-g lobotomy