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::: Remember When :::

Remember when we could talk without ending in tears

Thinking about us not staying friends was our biggest fear

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Remember when we'd laugh so hard we would have endless tears in our eyes

How we would always tell the truth, dismissing all the lies

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Remember when we would watch movies till the dead of night

Hardly ever did you see us fight

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Remember when our friendship was the only thing in the world that mattered

Nothing could make our glass frame s h a t te r

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Remember when we would talk about how we'll always stay best friends

How we would never see a day when it would end

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Remember when we would feel so complete and alive

Sadly I can't remember the day the Quirkey Quartet died...

Author notes

You guys, it was awesome hanging out together. Raising hell, and not caring what people thought of us four. Yes ladies and gentlemen, the other poems that were inspired by us four such as "The Quirky Quartet" and "Quirkey Quartet vs. Life" Well I guess it was awesome while it lasted. I mean now we can't even sit in the same room without wanting to rip each other's tongues out of our heads!

Jonsie Victoria Mackenzie
Written July 13th, 2006

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  • Dead Star--x
    July 25, 2006
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    I hate it when that happens, you grow apart and when you spend so much time together you find each others faults and they nag at you and drive you crazy so much that to the point you just cant do it anymore. a life lesson learned, maybe one day you'll look bac and rekindle the friendship, but who knows... keep the memories close to your heart so yuo can reflect on the lighter side instead of all the dark.. and i should take my own advice as well.
    Abused


  • Silent suffering 67
    July 23, 2006
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    kl poem it is very sweet and sad keep up the gd work


  • American x Witch
    July 20, 2006
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    Dripping down the drain much, Isa? Damn. This poem rocked. Dont' let it get you down. In my opinion, Kenzie was always a bi.tch. Great write. Awesome flow. Don't let life and all the bi.tches it carries get you down.

    ~Crissi

  • FedUpWitU80
    July 14, 2006
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    Yeah I remember that Isabel. I'm just glad that you and me didn't go down the drains . Even though I'm sure you know this too, but it was amazing while it lasted and I'd do it again in a heartbeat..only I might change some things. This is an amazing write, and I'm glad you wrote it. I loved it!
    I LOVE YOU ISABEL!
    Me
    PS-Hopefully you got the myspace pictures!


  • princesspaige
    July 14, 2006
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    I like the start heaps its very good the last line was sad...
    you have done this poem very nicely well done! keep writing more poems soon...talk to you soon...
    love ya always from Princess Paige xoxoxo


  • Of the FreakVariety
    July 14, 2006
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    Lovely.
    This was very touching, and it shows that you're sad about what happened and you miss your relationship being the way that it was. The flow was pretty good and the rhyming was excellent, and I just really liked this one for the feel of it all and the emotion. I don't know what went on, but I wish you all the best of luck and I hope things turn out for the better.
    xxJessie

  • BreakingxThexHabit
    July 14, 2006
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    Well I am still friends with the three of them. But Kenzie is not talking to Jonsie or Victoria for all these reasons. And Victoria is not talking to Kenzie. So yeah, us four just went down the drain. Thanks for commenting hun! Much love, have fun in MA with Miranda

    Isabel


  • OctoberCrush
    July 14, 2006
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    It's very...intailed...but it's good and honest...good write.!!


  • your effing-wReCk
    July 14, 2006
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    Isabel ... are you, Kenzie, Jonsie, and Tora like.. not friends anymore or something?!? Gosh, what have I been missing this summer? Well, we still haven't hung out yet, and we definitely need. to. The poem was cute; good write, wasn't dark though, so it surprised me. Love ya much, always hun! Ttyl- xx Amy

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