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A Friend Rictameter

Present,
A lovely gift
A God given splendor
Something that I enjoy daily
A friend that He has given me
Candi Michelle Hall is
My friend, and my
Present

Humbled
I find myself
Bowed, my face ground level
As I listen to my best Friend
The Lord of all Creation and my Dad
The best dad anyone could want
Always willing to hear
Me, as I stand
Humbled

Author notes

Candi is my best friend I realized though today that I have never written a poem for her, so.. I also thought as this being titled a Friend Ricatmeter, I should metion my best friend....the Lord
Written July 13th, 2006

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  • Resurrected-heart
    July 16, 2006
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    What a loving tribute to your friend and an awsome praise for God.
    Excellent work. God bless you.
    RH


  • DestinyLies
    July 15, 2006
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    OMG you're making me cry CHELS!!!!*tears* LOL I love it!!!!!THanks !!! LYLAS always here for ya!!!!!
    ~Candi~
    AKA Dylan Lover!!!!/Nathan strangler!(LOL)


  • Tangled Angle
    July 15, 2006
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    This was really good and heartfelt. Keep the pen flowing. Keep it real.

    -SFT

  • lillmissunshine
    July 14, 2006
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    hey chelsea,
    this is ccol!! I'm sure when ever candi see's it she will lke it also! I loved how you added the spiritual aspect to her poem. Well great job and keep writing.
    Kimberly
    ps on second though STOP WRITING!!!! lol

  • Cody Heitzig
    July 14, 2006
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    GREAT

    Thats a very beautiful poem.keep up the good work


  • FireyAura
    July 13, 2006
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    you don't remember...well, you told me to write more poetry and I said I didn't have time, but come to think of it, I do like nothing in the summer, so I thought I better write something


  • Sharcu silver member
    July 13, 2006
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    Guilty for what?


  • FireyAura
    July 13, 2006
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    thanks, after what you said, you made me feel guilty no, really, I thought I should write one for her. Thatnks though for the comment and applause
    ~*Chelsea*~


  • Sharcu silver member
    July 13, 2006
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    Beautiful poem, Chelsea! Shoot! I didn't comment before Emily did But still, this is really great. I know Candi will love it. I also like how you included a spiritual side into it. I'm not sure that I've seen you write in a specific form before. Have you? Well, great job! I'm glad to see you writing more potry
    --Tim


  • FireyAura
    July 13, 2006
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    hey Emily, thaks for the comment Ya, she wrote me a poem today, and I thought you know...I haven't even written one for her But, thanks for taking time to read this
    ~*Chelsea*~

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