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Trusting You





A coincidence lead me to mesmerizing orb of icy
blue that spoke to my soul. A cryptic message
they branded within my psyche. For days
upon days it danced about. I searched
and read and not a clue I found.
For like the pyramids of
Ancient Egypt this
message was to
a mystery.


Time crept on by
as voiceless nudges taunted
me daily. Silent calls drew me back;
there I sat attempting to decipher an energetic
code that played about my psyche like the never
ending melody of a heart's deepest desires. Emerald
gems spent months searching for clues veiled at every
possible turn. Down within the depths of my core,
feelings began to stir. As autumn leaves fell,
spring slowly began blossoming within
a wounded and frail, ice covered
heart-shaped shell.



Not before long and days turned to weeks and
weeks to months and life goes on. Frequently
returning at the hands of an whispered pull
to indulge within the intoxicating crystal
pools that captured my soul with a
single gaze. Ensnared from the
spellbinding touch of such
entrancing energies
enveloping.


Emerging each
time swaddled within a
tenderness of vulnerability
welcomed. A paw printed path leading
to deep thoughts of a bewildering sensation
of a loving dominance present. Graced by a
mystical touch of healing hands entwined within
a warming embrace of understanding and acceptance.


Your energetic essence had left its mark upon me,
though not a word had been uttered. Zealous
feelings continually churned deep within
the ventricles of me. Often I would find
myself pining over your page as my
mind desperately struggled to
solve the mystery of this
cryptograph.

 

Some much time had
come to pass and still strangers
we were. Admiring you from a far
with an undeniable curiosity, I remained
quietly sitting in shadowed corners watching
all the goings on about. Suddenly one day a post
you created announcing a search you began. A
pet you sought, one compatible, worthy and
unique. One whose energy in which to
blend and satisfy both body and
mind. Oh now this was so
interesting or so was
my response.


It seemed my response peaked your curiosity to
which a message was sent and our talk began.
Hours past as we joked and laughed, poked
and prodded and just got comfortable
with one another. Before we knew
it was time for bed and so we
parted with a smile and
aching ribs from
laughter shared.


Opening up to
allow an energetic
blending of you and I, our
journey had begun. A path of
healing we walk together hand in
hand empowering one another. Daily we
act as mirrored reflections to keep awareness open
for growth as we travel various plains to enlightenment.

 

My heart
wounded, still
healing locked away
in the shadows away from
prying eyes. Keeping it sheltered,
safe from jagged-edged shards of past
loves thought to be true. Yet here I stand
with feelings, thought forgotten, flooding my
heart and soul that had begun to stir months before;
this time stronger, this time deeper, this time undeniable.


My faith in and of love is being challenged. So to
my heart I look and see wounds scabbed over,
not yet healed. Ignore what births in my
heart and I close the door at a chance
of love and happiness. Acknowledge
the growing waves within heart and
soul, taking a chance, risking my
semi-healed wounds torn open
wider and deeper. Heart
and mind fight an age
ole' battle, but alas,
the hopeless
romantic
wins.











Author notes

For Blazing White Wolf.......
with all my love.....
heart, mind, body and soul.......
I give it all to you completely

 

Written July 13th, 2006

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  • unnamed90
    September 26, 2006
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    Nice, really nice. Well done...it's so amazing!


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    September 10, 2006
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    Goodness, dear, that was absolutely breathtaking. Everything, from your writing style, to your word choices, just amazed me beyond anything I could possibly say. I don't think that any words, no matter how strong, could ever describe the intensity of my feelings upon reading this. I thought, "this is what true love feels like, and your voice [poetically speaking] was just so passionate and calm, as is Love. I really felt for the reader.

    This is definitely something special. Good luck in my contest, and take care!

    Much Love,

    Laura

    PS: Blazing White Wolf, you are one lucky man! This woman clearly loves you with all of her heart and soul, and I wish you both the best.

  • outlawtorn
    August 6, 2006
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    an amazing piece. congratulations on being awarded first place.
    a brand new shiny gold trophy for your allpoetry shelf. you truly deserve it...be well.


  • July 26, 2006
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    awesome read

    very nice read !!! was a joy reading this today blessed be(goth)


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    July 21, 2006
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    What a breath-taking piece you have laid before my very eyes and graced my contest with, my dear.

    This is very heartfelt, though-provoking, heart-wrenching- and so honest. It is the truest thing I've laid my eyes upon, and you live the avatar you have chosen.

    I am truly awed.

    Thank you for evetering my contest, and best of luck to you.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    July 21, 2006
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    wow my sweet sweet Bel this is just wow so beautiful and touches me again to the core I am wow flattered and honored to have such love from such the beautiful woman inside and out
    Love,
    Blaze


  • robert bolin
    July 20, 2006
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    This is one of the most sentiment poems I have ever read here on AP, And the passion in which you scribe from deep within your
    Heart sings so beautifully, To hear the echos of the past and know that they are fading while a new dawn brings the flame back
    Into the soul, Is just tranquil, as always brilliantly penned


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    July 14, 2006
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    Beautifully done dear sister and extremely revealing of your vulnerablity... congratulations on this step you have taken... I hope that things work out..


  • Always Deena
    July 14, 2006
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    Ain't Love Grand? I am speechless,and you know I am never without words. Wonderful!
    As Always,
    Deena


  • Desire gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Excellent Write

    Wow!!
    What a piece you have penned Bel
    YOU are so darn good at the visual presentations...
    especially incorporating shapes...
    through your written words!!
    Bravo to YOU on this Excellent write...
    but then I have not seen one any of your pieces
    less than Excellent!

    Best wishes to YOU in this contest
    Many blessings to YOU always
    Look forward to reading more of these
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • masterblaster gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Hi, be happy my friend, I think you have found what you were looking for, a lovely write, all the best in the comp, be hard to beat, hugs Di, you have my applause

  • NbutnoJ
    July 13, 2006
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    awww-AWESOME way 2 set it up...must have taken a LOOOONG time and ALOT of pateince..lol well its very cute, aweet, and heartfelt i love it!keep up the awesome work!!~Natalie


  • gullionmar
    July 13, 2006
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    the shaping was an awsome touch to this lovely poem written very well great emotion and imagery well done


  • KeeperOfTheNight
    July 13, 2006
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    mind boggling

    wow just wow


  • wbiro gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    My first thought at the title was 'somebody's gotten themselves into trouble with my sis here! but now I see the pic and I'm braced for a positive piece... hmmm... possibly some auto-bio in there, with the emerald orbs and melting heart... a 'welcomed vunerability', that is something only a woman would understand, I think! 'Paw printed path' I see our animal urges and desires at work... and at this point there is a sense of a storyline, the poem is leading somewhere... 'Pet'! That gave it away! It is good to have someone to bring out the best in us, and I'm glad you have one!


  • mtowndiva
    July 13, 2006
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    Nice job one of a king
    Keep writing
    God Bless and thnxs for sharing

  • luvdrkchocolate
    July 13, 2006
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    Nice. What a great little piece of poetry that you have written here. I like it! I like the little image that you start this piece with and the message that it has. I think that it's very true and a great way to start your piece. Your words had a very floating quality that seemed both light and heavy at the same time. I don't know if that makes sense but that's what I thought lestways. Or how it read to me. It seemed like a great tribute for the person that you intended this for. So I think that you did a great job of expressing yourself here. Good luck in the contest you entered and thanks for featuring this so that we all had a chance to share your words and feelings with you!

  • gaerielle
    July 13, 2006
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    highly pleasurable

    : ) Hopeless romantics never loose : ) your poetry is a lovely hand enclosing a heart in supreme repose. Hummm sweet fingers, purest pearls of orient rose.. LUUUv the Egyptian backdrop a real privilege to read your poem : ) am in for the contest!
    Edited on Jul 13, 2:26 p.m. because 'grammar'.


  • linx20
    July 13, 2006
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    Great job

    Awwww This was wonderful. I dont know what the shaping thing was but it cool. I liked this one. this how a lot of people feel hen they find true love. Cause us hopeless romantics are often the ones to get hurt. So we either stop trying or put ourselves out there again. This was a wonderful poem.


  • littleoneof-God
    July 13, 2006
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    WOW

    W-O-W!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's just about all I can think of to say. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • CorazonQuebrado6
    July 13, 2006
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    Awww thats very cute. I like the format. Amazinggg job


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    July 13, 2006
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    This was one of the most beautiful poems I have read in such a long time. The words, the format, the emotions were all beautiful. What a wonderful piece and one you should be so proud of...Great Work.

    Soulful Woman

  • Angelshadow
    July 13, 2006
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    Wow.. cool format!
    i haven't seen anything like it yet.
    Nice job!!

  • verses on flesh
    July 13, 2006
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    Awwwwwwwwwwwe -smacks you-


  • StarEyes
    July 13, 2006
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    Wow! This is simply amazing! pure joy to read. i can feel your love in this write! keep your pen forever flowing!


  • Silence of Finality gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Unmatched

    Awww. You two make such a powerful couple. Not Merlin's magic nor Siren's song could ever break your bond. Emotionally, Spiritually and Physically. The world is a better place just for having the two of you together, in it.

    I loved this piece the format and the word choices were outstanding. Excellent write, but then again I wouldn't expect anything less.

  • Damselflydreams
    July 13, 2006
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    "A coincidence lead me to mesmerizing orb of icy blue that spoke to my soul. " This line grabbed me from the start since it describes my first glimpse of my lovers eyes when I opened the door to him. It may not be what you were describing but it is incredibly compelling is, as is the remainder of this beautiful work.


  • RavenChild
    July 13, 2006
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    This is cery beautiful and well written. I enjoyed immensley.


  • Foxydaze14
    July 13, 2006
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    I agree, a truyl beautiful piece. I really like this and the style you used is excellent. you wrote it all so well and it flows together so well too. Thanks for sharing it with us on AP! Keep up the great work and keep on writing!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 13, 2006
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    A truly truly beautiful write of love and devotion and of opening up your lovely heart! Thank you for sharing, sweet sister soul! Love ya and wish you all the best!

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