It's twilight time
The end of a quite busy day
It's twilight time
All is quiet, feelings sublime
Mind free to ponder, free to stray
To meditate, to kneel and pray
It's twilight time.
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Written July 13th, 2006
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A contest entry
- For Poets With More Than 50 Trophies by wakingdevil.
301 points, ended July 17, 2006, 2 entries
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i dont really see how this really relates to the book. but i guess i'll keep it.
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I like this simple form creating the transition from the busyness of day to the quiet of the night.
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Wonderful use of the Rondelet. The French would be proud. I like the layout and the fact that you were able to use a prewrite to nail the theme straight on. Content was a bit commercial. "It's Twilight Time" felt a bit too simple. My personal observations of this type of structured poetry generally show a more moving and elaborate refrain, but to each his own. Good work here, cheers, and good luck.
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I'm not too familiar with the form but I can make it out with the repittition and monorhymes.The poem with such restrictions was really well done and flowed beautifully never seeming forced.Thanks for entering and best of luck
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lovely
I love this - it is so restful. I just back from a hectic situation and this was waiting for me. Very nice work!!
Good luck in the contest!
hugs WolfHeart
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