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Little Friends

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Little bears and kittens,

were playing in a tree.
Around and around they go,
singing 'You can't catch me!'

Laughing and having fun,
but it was not very long,
before more little friends,
came to join along.

Mommy bear decided,

to make them all a snack.
She fixed them all some treats,
putting each in a pretty sack.

Now all the little friends,

had a picnic on the ground.
First they all said grace,
happy smiles were all around.

Soon with their bellies full,
it was time to take a nap.
Each friend went home happy,
the bears climbed in Mommy's lap.

She rocked her cubs to sleep,
then put them in their bed.
Leaned down and placed a kiss,
on each sweet little forehead.

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JeannieD

Written July 13th, 2006

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Comments

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  • Quill Bill
    May 13, 2008
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    thats sweet,


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Hehe adorable.. just adorable. So sweet and sentimental, a beauty & treasure to read. Love the rhyme in this as well. A lovely little baby poem, and perfect for the baby book. Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Namita
    August 4, 2007
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    Sweet. I can't see your gold trophy?

  • Damselflydreams
    July 13, 2006
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    This is so sweet and just a light-hearted story that is perfect for a child at heart of any age. It makes me feel good to read it as it is packed with love. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings....


  • DarkHunter
    July 13, 2006
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    Brilliant

    This is a brilliant nursery rhyme and any child who gets read this will love it. This is cute and fun. Good luck in the contest.


  • Gabreon
    July 13, 2006
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    Sweet

    This is a wonderfully sweet little poem! I read through it, and it was such a delight to read something so innocent and just playful. I realize I have grown somewhat weary of the villains and troubles and such that I read in poetry so often, so it was just a mighty relief to read this. Thank you for writing it, and best of luck in the contest! ^_^


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Thanks so much Grace. I really appreciate your wonderful comment. Jeannie


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    July 13, 2006
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    WOW! So cute and lovely this is. Very warm and cheerful. I loved reading it. Good on meter also. Nice flow and rhyme. Very enjoyable.

    All the best,
    Charishma

    P.S. MY name means Grace, so I loved it even more when you refer to grace

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