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Another Goodbye

Another goodbye,
was whispered painfully
this morning at Luqa airport.

Unsweetened invisible tears
have moved our hearts in the silence
of a fake smile as our lips, apart.

As time anxiously ticking ahead of us,
my heart sinks in its beat.
The child in me wants to rebel,
But instead I remain calm…
I become, totally numb…

His vision is getting blared.
His presence is stepping away,
Leaving me with a life, I, don’t want to live.

As my eyes gave birth to my only tear alive,
I feel like a fire burning all at ones inside.
It is his love, which loyally stood by my side,
Softly I hear it whispering …
‘Soon he will be back in your arms’

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Written July 12th, 2006

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  • DarkRomantic113
    January 16, 2008
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    You do a wonderful job capturing emotion. *applause*

  • Apache143
    September 20, 2007
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    Hi darling Bella as usual from you a deeply emotional piece of work about the man in your life.

  • Apache143
    January 22, 2007

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    As usual a deeply meaningful piece of work and as I know of whom you are speaking I know he would have been feeling exactly the same....Love Shaz

  • scorpio
    November 17, 2006
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    Isa, this is truly awesome.. you made me cry, also knowing its an ever repeating process right now.. I pray God gives you strength... luckily love you did find and in life thats quite something.. you just need strength and a friend.. count me in. God bless