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Burning midnight oil

Watching 4 O'clock shadows while burning the midnight oil,

memories of an ol' past arise, standing "Vivid and so Loyal".

No sleep for this aching heart burning deep within my chest,

while searching for answers of a son that's now laid to rest.

So many moonlit walks, on roads that seem to lead nowhere,

asking the Lord "over and over" how could life be so unfair.

Winds blow in every direction, rains continue to come an go,

as for me I have questions, with answers I may never know.

A smile that was unstoppable, eyes dark brown and strong,

a heart made of 1000 Angels that could do nothing wrong.

Your word was 'good as gold', and promises you would fulfill,

with trust you've gave to everyone, as a sign of your goodwill.

And where does the fairness hold? Just outside of our grasp,

like a fairytale that’s been told, of a {ancient pharaohs asp}.

I remember watching you take your first step across the floor,

now son with immense pain, I watch you take your last step...

over the threshold of heavens door, I LOVE YOU SON

Author notes

Option #8
..."I miss you my love."


I write this about my son that passed away last year, and the so many sleepless nights I have. I think these words I write are the only thing that holds me together and not giving up. HE WAS MY LIFE, MY SON, AND MY FRIEND, May his soul live forever in the house of the Lord.
Written July 13th, 2006

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  • LaylaLace
    August 21, 2008

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    Thank you for entering this poem. I can tell this comes straight from the heart. Good luck in the contest!

  • MinaMunoko
    August 13, 2006
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    First of all, I'm sorry about your son but I'm sure he's in a much better place. Great job on this my friend. Great format and a can feel the emotions. Great work and good luck in my contest!

    mina


  • getsbetter
    July 31, 2006
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    Thank you Choirangel. Actually I'm his dad, and I guess you could say I was both that I raised him. But thank you for your so kind words. I'm glad you liked the poem....GETS


  • Heartofacircle
    July 31, 2006
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    aaww im so sorry for your loss and your words special so well of him, he is lucky to have such a wonderful mother like you, thanks for sharing this piece, keep up the awesome poetry here.


  • JadedxPassion
    July 18, 2006
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    This Is So Sad And Beautiful. I'm Sorry To Hear About Your Loss, But I'm Very Proud You Are Using Your Beautiful Writing To Help You Through And Get Other People Aware. Beautiful.Good Luck.


  • getsbetter
    July 18, 2006
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    Thank you band for your words that were so kind, and I am glad you liked the poem. I don't think I could explain any better how I feel at this time...GETS


  • BandGeek101
    July 18, 2006
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    this was great. I loved it it was very touching and I am really sorry about what happened. This was wonderfully written and I really enjoyed reading this it made me see how you feel


  • July 14, 2006
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    I have read poems that you have written about your son and I am always touched by them. I just cant imagine the grief of losing a child. We are not supposed to outlive our children. I guess you cope the best you can and live each day one at a time. There are no words to console you but I do feel deeply for you .


  • Inside and out
    July 14, 2006
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    Gary, this poem overflows with emotion. Your poem is flawless in execution and a diamond in content. It is absolutely one of my favorite poems that expresses the love that you had for your son. Many blessings to you my dear poet. This is indeed a treasure.


  • tawk gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    excellent poem

    What a wonderful spiritual poem I just loved it. Amen awesome job


  • M0ofi3
    July 13, 2006
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    My dear Gary;

    You are a modern-day Job. You have been brought to this place, for this place is yours; you have been prepared for this.

    What I see in you is a man that who has not lost his way to the Lord. It may seem so at times, but that is not true. You are where you're supposed to be. If not now, in time you will see His goodness again in your life. It is there now, and you will see this. Just keep looking for it.

    He is taking truth, with pain, to define you; help you to see the man you're meant to be; patterned after the Man. This is done with mercy and tenderness. You will see this as well.

    Then one day you will have all your answers, without even asking the questions. For you will see the face, of the Man, in His glory. That alone will answer those unasked, unspoken questions. I see it for you.

    At that time, all pain, grief, confusion and loss, will be left behind you. Before you will be nothing but love and peace.

    He has promised this. He will not forsake the work of His hands, which you are.

    Lord;

    By faith we have access into this grace we have through Your Son, Jesus, and are at peace. We thank You for that. For my friend and brother, Gary, please, by grace, may he see this, for Your glory, and his benefit. You have not forsaken him; and You will lead him to glory. He will be Your poem of glory, as will be the case of all Your children.

    By Jesus, craft all that he has faced, with purpose and truth, buffered with love, joy and peace.

    I thank You in advance. In Jesus' name-AMEN!



    Edited on Jul 13, 4:52 p.m. because ''.


  • getsbetter
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you Dragon for your kind words, and yes I hope he is. He'll know how I feel...GETS


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    AWESOME!

    Awesome! In each word is a part of your heart and soul.


  • Ink4Blood
    July 13, 2006
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    wow!!! this really is a tear jerker. i am sorry to hear about your son. but think, he is watching over you now.

    ~Justin~


  • July 13, 2006
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    sleep well

    This digs so deep. I don't want my short comments to reflct the weight of this piece. This was very good from a poem standpoint and overwhelming as a soulfull portrait.


  • angel-lover
    July 13, 2006
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    your welcome sweetie


  • getsbetter
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you Angel for your so kind words, Wish I could set it aside, but if I did, I think my heart would stop. Again, thank you Angel. Your friend ...GETS


  • angel-lover
    July 13, 2006
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    hi gets, every-time I see your name I read your work as i know you have such a gift in your poetry, when i read this one it really hit home very heartbreaking piece
    from angel..(tairs)
    Edited on Jul 13, 4:24 p.m. because 'icon..'.

  • Ir.muse
    July 13, 2006
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    "working" means I shouldn't be here? ok...ok...I'm going.

    Shahrzad

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