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Insane

Insane

What the hell is going on
Have insurgents lost their minds
If they would stop the killing,
We would all be gone in time

Sometimes I think they want us here
It’s their way to say don’t go
If America’s not here
They would lose the war

The Shiites and Kurds are getting strong
They had better make peace soon
If not they’ll have no army
To fight with once we’re gone

Now call me stupid or naïve
But they have what they asked for
So take your piece and let us go
And we’ll be here no more

Author notes

After hear about the news of the last couple of days witht the kidnaping of Israel soldiers, I had to post this, Some from the book,  A intelligent comments welcome.  Kidnap one troop they kill 500 so that seem to work well, so lets go kidnap 2 soldiers, unless their goal is to dead, I just don't get it.  And then to here the the people that are about to get invaded accually thought the kidnapping was worth celibrating.  May it was to them but I will say a extra prayer for the people of Lebanone and Palistine tonight becuse I think they are going to need it.  I'm not picking sides just making observations
Written July 13th, 2006

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  • July 19, 2006
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    your emotions just scream of frustration
    and the wondering of the "how" and the "why"
    in this most riveting poem. to "chatter" always;
    and not be "still" to listen you have written
    passionately of and again; most deserving topic.
    lynn
    p.s. thank you for what you do and pls. stay safe.
    bless you


  • stylisthd
    July 15, 2006
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    very wounderful poem great job and thanks for definding our country thanks alot


  • mzladyt
    July 14, 2006
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    Glad to have you here where you can let us know what is going on too. Keep up the good work.


  • FaeryPixieFey
    July 14, 2006
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    What a good job in conveying your feelings. Clap! Clap! RobinRae.

  • gypsy princess
    July 13, 2006
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    comprimise is goverment capeble of that?
    i aint had that much time for the news lately (it's too full of bad news for my likeing)
    it seems to me as long as there is something
    to fight about there will be wars for next to no reason
    at all.
    im just real sorry for all the dear brave souls
    that get caught up in it all.

    i hope there is peace soon and i'll say a prayer
    asking for it.

    z

    Toni


  • gullionmar
    July 13, 2006
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    how very true charlie, if the poeple would stop and listen to te other side and talk and comprimise their would be so much less sdeath going on and peace would come sooner god bless and keep you safe along with all our troops great poetry

  • June-bug
    July 13, 2006
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    hey Charlie, I am not sure what to say on this matter, I haven't caugth news the last couple of days, just bits and pieces, seems like the world is going insane, with this and Korea with their missles. I pray for all everywhere, espically the leaders of any country things are looking real good right now in world politics. Stay safe and God Bless.

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