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Keep passing

The flame burns the dense green
As i suck in the fumes
The THC rushes to my brain
As i blow out the remaining smoke
Light headed for a brief moment
I pass the little pezo
Once i get it back
Same happens again
This time my Bic gets hot
A little to much for me
And i choke
But i recover in time,
To take my next hit
Around and around it goes
When some one hits "ass"
Every one knows

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MILK ME
Written July 13th, 2006

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  • Tony El Great silver member
    July 13, 2006
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    Pezo??
    What, you guys put bowls on pez dispensers now?? (LOL)'
    Edited on Jul 13, 2:49 p.m. because ''.


  • Leela
    July 13, 2006
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    how novel.......not very interesting, I could have told you that, so could alot of people, there's really not much to this....though, you were high so.....anyway.........now that i've been a total bitch, I will say, I like the part, "Around and around it goes, when someone hits "ass" , everybody knows"

    *Leah


  • Rachal
    July 13, 2006
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    HAHA I like this so much. omg...its like my life story for real...
    I really like this tho...the little part about the bic gave you brownie points tho...you should know wut im talking about. HAHA yea...