Look at me &
Watch me freeze
Your eyes of
Beautiful ice
Paralyze me
& I feel weakened,
Nearly dropping
To my knees,
I want to carry
Your burden,
So your pain
Can be eased.
Let me be
The guy with
The 10 foot
Wings, the one
Who carries
You off in
Your sweetest
Of dreams,
The One to
Make your
Heart skip
A thousand beats;
To give you
A kiss
And watch
Your face
Turn pink.
Come, now,
Sugah, Let's
Turn up tha heat,
Mah Missassippi Sugah;
No other human
Soul could
Taste as
Darkly sweet.
Author notes
The Misspelled words are misspelled for a more southern accent.
Yo, Keep chillin' mah Missassippi Sugah!
Written July 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- Evil Chickens Have Taken My Mind by DarkenedDreams.
300 points, ended August 7, 2006, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very well done. This made my heart skip a few beats, for sure. Love the expressions, would make any hot blooded woman sigh and thensome.
Bella
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I liked your poem and how it rushed along and said what was wanted; I was just in Missasip last month, cool as ever. Some of my ancestors from Newton County. ¦:¬{
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That was very good and it was ment for me. thank you and i will be seeing you around soon.
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This is a great poem I love it. It has very few words but it is straight to the point and that is what I love about this poem.... I am wishing you the best of luck in my contest. Also before I forget I am also telling everyone that has entered that they can write another poem it they want. That is a detail that I have entered and I am telling everyone. I also like the way that you made the poem also I think it is great.
Darkened Dreams
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