I walk through life alone I weep,
the cash I earn I do not keep.
The isolation felt within my dreams
are my path to life or so it seems.
The tangled road in which I drive
leaves me little to stay alive.
My mind embedded deep with sin,
a darkened shroud is felt within.
As darkness touched the midnight plain,
my dreams awash in A sea of pain.
An angel touched my fingertips,
I screamed in sin, she shushed my lips.
She lead me to A far off place
where no one looked me in the face.
Judgement is in the heart and soul,
not in the flesh that makes us all.
I've crossed the boundaries that border life
but he still forgave me when he died.
Awash and drowning in A sea of sin
forgiveness gave me life again.
Author notes
The name is political please do not judge that which you do not know...
Thanks. Frank.
Written July 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- Walking With Christ by Tabitha-Robin.
300 points, ended August 19, 2006, 15 entries
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I really liked this one, I agree with Toni, this piece really does Identify with the reader on many levels and I got a calming peace from this read, whether it was intended or not, I took much from it, thanks for entering. Jacen.
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You'll never walk alone......
as long as you stay with Christ and keep holding on with faith and prayer...This is a beautiful write and i am sure alot if people can identify with it..Every Christian in fact. He bore all of our sins so that we may be forgiven and made whole!!Good luck in our contest and thanks for entering!!!!!~~Jacen & Toni~ -
This is very nicely written. I wish you all could be winners. I wish I could also give out ribbions or something to you all. I thank you for your entry and Good luck in the contest. You all are making this contest hard to judge.
Tabitha
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This was very impressionable and just awesome I loved it because it had enough feeling
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A beautiful message of God's love for his children..I can truly relate to this..Excellent job.Thanks for entering and good luck. God bless, Brenda
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