I cried for you today
I learned what you have been through
It kills me to know what happened then
I pray to God it doesn't happen now
I would give up my life just to make you happy
I would throw it all away to give you one more day
Maybe if you knew it then
You wouldn't have had the pain
I hope I have taken it all away
If not, then I won't stop till I have
You mean everything to me
That's why I want to tell you
I cried for you today
I learned what you have been through
It kills me to know what happened then
I pray to God it doesn't happen now
I would give up my life just to make you happy
I would throw it all away to give you one more day
Maybe if you knew it then
You wouldn't have had the pain
I hope I have taken it all away
If not, then I won't stop till I have
You mean everything to me
That's why I want to tell you
I cried for you today
Author notes
I am being literal when I said "I cried for you today." Reading some different entry's from somebody very close to me is what made me write this. The pain this person felt, the deep, deep pain that settles into one's soul...I want to lift that out of their soul so that they may never have to feel pain like they had in their past again!
Written July 12th, 2006
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This is a very good write. I can relate to feeling someone else's pain like you do right at this moment. It is always nice to see when someone will take the pain they feel for someone so close to them instead of focusing on themselves. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep penning this was great.
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A very well written free-verse. Very expressive and nicely done. Keep up the great work, angelfish. I love you very much; you have always been my best friend!
~Andy


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