Each day the abortionist’s knives
Take away hundreds of innocent lives;
When are you going to wake up and hear
Their silent cries of help full of fear?
Author notes
I hold a Biblical Christian worldview. I am a pro-life in all cases. Jesus tells us to bring the little children to Him. How can we if we are slautering them? Don't think that this problem is going to just go away. It won't.
If you are pro-choice, please just leave. I do not care to argue this. I respect your opinions, please respect mine. You aren't going to change my point of view by coming on here and telling me how much you hate my poetry, how I'm a horrible person, and how women have the right to chose. I don't come on your poetry and do that so please respect mine.
To my friends: please do not promote this. I got enough bad publicity on my last poem. I appreciate the thought. If you really want to get people to comment, please just promote this to Christian groups.
Written July 12th, 2006
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short but good its true well i thought i would comment your poem im not writing poems right nowm but i will soon promise
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I share your view on this. Very stong and very emotional. Great job on this one. I admire that you have written this and posted it. Well done.
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Great write!
I admire your strength of mind and heart in this controversial issue. Keep a strong hold on that. That said:
I love this write. It's short, but very strong, And obviously deeply felt. Well done, and keep it up!
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VEry true. And it hits home. Hard. I am definately pro life, but some how i feel for the mothers who went through that hell, and then have all these people saying things to them. you no? But thank God for those that are catching momz 2 b before they commit this horrible crime.
Thanx for your voice
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even though it's short, it was really good, and it hit home. i admire your firm stance on abortion. too many people are in the grey area on this subject.
NMNM
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Nice job on this Tim! You know my viewpoint. Pro-life always! God bless you! Noble1
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This is an amazing poem. Well written, and short to the point. I am all agreeing with you.
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People on AllPoetry are close-minded in this issue. Either they are pro-choice or they are pro-life. I've spent enough time debating over the issue that I don't want to debate it anymore. They would come on here and say stuff like rape, mother dying, mother's choice, this poem sucks, I suck as a person, I should stop writing poetry, etc. And honestly, I don't need any of that. Please take a look at my poem titled "Abortion: America's Holocaust" and look at the comments I received. (You'll need to click on the view all comments link.) Then you'll realize why I put that on here. Thanks for reading
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'please just promote this to Christian groups.'
Just a thought, but if you only promote this to Christian groups, who probably believe the same, how will you get all the other people to understand?
I am a Christian and agree with you on the subject of abortion.
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Thank you so much for your applause and comment. I completely agree with you that the baby's choice is taken away. Seems like no one cares.
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awesome
Yes! I agree with this poem. Short but one of the most meaningful poems I've read for awhile. They always say womans choice? Well what about the babys choice? -
I agree with this poem 110%!!! I am pro-life!!! Babies should NOT be killed by abortion! It sickens me to hear about how many innocent babies are being brutally murdered each day!
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Hey tim this is really awesome. It is so true to. I have to agree with chelsea and candi, and say i'll back you 100% Abortion is wrong,and it is very wrong. Great write with this poem.
Kimberly
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You have touched a tender spot with me. I believe strongly that abortion is sent straight from hell. Thank you for voicing your opinion so that I may voice my agreement. Shancy.
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WOW Tim I am SPEACHLESS!!! It's really great!! I say as chelsea i'm behind you100%!!!
Great!!! Keep writing
Dsgirlie
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Wow Tim. I know that I alread ytold you this, but this is really great! I stand behind you one hundred percent. I think that it is wrong to kill innocent lives. It is not the babies fault that they are conceived. I think that is addds a lot with the read and black......it is almost disturbing though. I would promote this, but I completely understand your reasoning in not wanting to. This is great! Awesome write Tim.
~*Chelsea*~
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