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Hypocrite

You say that you love me, you pretend that you care,
but if I ever needed you, you won’t be there.
And yet, if you ever want someone to talk to,
I’d be there in an instant to help you get through.

Am I the only one who sees the danger signs?
Are you just using me for your own designs?

You tell me that you love me, and you’ll be with me forever,
then you turn around and say we have no future together.
I thought you might be different, but it turns out you’re full of shit,
I guess you’re just like every other guy I’ve ever been with…
you’re nothing but a chauvinistic hypocrite!

You tell me you want me, you tell me you need me,
I sleep with you and you tell me I’m too easy.
And yet if I hadn’t, you would have walked away,
I guess me being “easy” was what made you stay.

Am I the only one who sees the danger signs?
Do you really love me, or was that just more lies?

You tell me that you love me, and you’ll be with me forever,
then you turn around and say we have no future together.
I thought you might be different, but it turns out you’re full of shit,
I guess you’re just like every other guy I’ve ever been with…
you’re nothing but a lying, cheating hypocrite!

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You tell me that you love me, and you’ll be with me forever,
then you turn around and say we have no future together.
I thought you might be different, but it turns out you’re full of shit,
I guess you’re just like every other guy I’ve ever been with…
you’re nothing but a dirty little hypocrite!

I guess you’re just a motherfucking hypocrite!!

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  • i know how you feel in this one too. i hate people who lie and cheat!


  • Ami
    April 11

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    Awesome write =]

    Wow reminds me of my ex
    Hate guys who do that..
    I noticed I can relate to a lot of you're lyrics/poems
    I'm Happy to be you're AP sister


  • bedazzled
    July 15, 2006
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    Very strongly written! Impactive definately, fantastique as always!


  • blendsintothecrowd
    July 13, 2006
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    Nifty!

    Argh...people who don't read the thingy that says it's a song!...but I like it. I think that it was absolutely spectacular...I heard it kinda heavy in my head, but it would be good light too...what sort of style would it be in? It goes together rather well, and I think it would work with either a fast or slow tempo. But good job, anger...ad I'm not scared at all....


  • Toadluvinlady
    July 12, 2006
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    AWESOME

    You fucking ROCKED this poem!!! It was deep, flowed, and had a huge statement behind it!!! LOVE IT!!!! I'm going to book mark this one!!! Thanks for sharing and if I could applause this 100 time I would!!!


  • Moondust-Dreams
    July 12, 2006
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    Good

    Wow.Thats a good poem! Great job.If i was a man,id be so scaried.lol.My favorite lines were:
    "I thought you might be different, but it turns out you’re full of shit,
    I guess you’re just like every other guy I’ve ever been with…
    You’re nothing but a lying, cheating hypocrite!"
    Great poem.

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