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Lost

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Where does one go when they are forgotten?
When they are left alone to face life’s problems

without knowledge of their roots?

Where does one go when they have loved?
When they have lost and left numb with hurt?
Is there love?

Only those who have loved and lost can understand

the confusion and the sudden realization of

FAILURE

 

 

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Option #6- Being left or divorced by a lover because you failed at something

Written July 12th, 2006

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  • A. L. Armocido - AM
    December 19, 2007
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    This was very powerful. Everything from the picture to the last line FAILURE. Everything was so emotional and real.... I am so happy that you entered this because it just expresses this pain in such a way that I am not sure that anyone else could. Well done and thank you for entering. Good luck.

  • esroddo silver member
    August 13, 2007

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    Fantastic write

    So many question and so little answers, I love this lines; "Where does one go when they have loved?
    When they have lost and left numb with hurt?
    Is there love?" LISA


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 25, 2006
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    Its only failure if you let it be. Sometimes you will find everyone loves in a different way. But love never ends if you have it in your soul. There will be one out there who will see that special love and will see that love of yours is brought out in full bloom. And the one who left her will always try to find that love he let go
  • Puppydog gold member
    July 15, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL POEM MY FRIEN

    Yes your words are so true, and also those who have loved can see that the true love is something that one should always try to find.

  • 0darkAngel0
    July 15, 2006
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    When they have lost and left numb with hurt?
    Is there love?

    the question that lingers in me too
    is there love???

    well expressed...
    thank you for sharing

  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    July 13, 2006
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    Here I am, feeling something along the lines of what you write. I am a little homesick and feeling a wee bit lost. Seomtimes we give up more than we meant too...but then, we may have expected a little back. You think?

  • Heavenly Angel
    July 13, 2006
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    I know the feelings all too well, my dear friend! I have felt "lost" more times than I care to count...
    I wish you brighter days and better tomorrow's, sweetie!

  • Poetic Assassin
    July 12, 2006
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    Man kinda wish it was alil longer but to each his own....
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