Overwhelmed by fears,
Never knowing where
This life will lead.
Hope, a, growing
Existence, making me
Ever stronger as I am
Determined to exceed.
Grant me the strength to
Endure my failures, and then rise. I will
Overcome the cobwebs that in my soul lies.
Feeling once again, feel to make me whole.
Improving all the thoughts that
Now lock me in their control. Keep me
Sane as I walk this path in life,
Allowing me to clear away the strife.
Now I know hardships will come and go, but
I can venture into this world and know,
That no matter what I do or see, I am not
Yet on the edge of insanity.
Author notes
option 2I
Written July 12th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Come One Come All, Plenty of Options:) by blue-eyed-disaster.
300 points, ended August 7, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for the comments. Just my bit of knowing that hope exists in us all, and that we can overcome whatever it is that brings us down.
Good luck with judging
Storm -
Wow, this was amazing and ur my first entry. This was a great write. I liked how you conveyed the message and I think we all feel on THE edge once in a while. Thank you for entering and goodluck!
The Dreamer
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