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The Folly

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Come, tickle my toes
or is it my nose?
with a feather all
pretty and white
and I'll make you laugh
when you sit in a draught
as your neck turns around
to the light
A strong smell of Roses
all cloying and stiff
dazzle senses a bit at a time
but posies of Roses midst
laughter and noses
wears thin round the edges
of rhyme....




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Written July 12th, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Lol, yes I suppose you are right ...I do enjoy a little nonsense at times

  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Glad you enjoyed it Many thanks

  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Lol, yes you could say that

  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you

  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Glad you enjoyed it, many thanks


  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Thanks Jeannie for your kind comments, as always they are very much appreciated

  • cutiepie gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you


  • wattle silver member
    July 13, 2006
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    A Cutie from Ms Cutie. You have to stop drinking from that bottle, it was supposed to be for medicinal purposes only. (Thank you)


  • tawk gold member
    July 13, 2006
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    What a cute and adorable poem. I really love it.


  • FaeryPixieFey
    July 12, 2006
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    Oh this poem was a cutiepie. Robinrae.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 12, 2006
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    This is a good write. I liked how you added the picture and all. This is a unique piece and I like it! Good luck with everything!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 12, 2006
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    fantastic truly a good write i will check back later on your work


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 12, 2006
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    This flows so smoothly.
    Great writing. Very nice
    poem.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Great job.

    Jeannie D Hunter


  • wings of an angel
    July 12, 2006
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    This is a very good write that you had penned here your use of words are superb, your rhythm flows nicely throughout the poem a well written piece I loved it

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