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It takes two

You seem to forget that it takes two.
It isn't just up to one of us to make it work.
You can't just click your fingers and expect me to be there!

I seem to get the feeling that you're not that bothered anymore.
Maybe its because of the time we've spent apart.
Or that you're scared of the commitment.

You seem to forget that it takes two.
It isn't just up to one of us to make it work.
You can't just click your fingers and expect me to be there!

We aren't going to work unless you understand this.
I can't keep us together by myself.
It takes two to make it work!

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Written July 12th, 2006

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  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 13, 2006
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    Julie is meant to be you i presume. Dont see how him saying that can be rude, but.... yeah i'm going to see how the next couple of days go first and then i probably will. One thing i do know is im not just going to give up on it and end it with him regardless of what others think.


  • LovedIntoExistence
    July 13, 2006
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    Hmmm... so tell him Who do you know called Julie btw? Oh well. xxxxxxx
    Edited on Jul 13, 11:52 because ''.

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 13, 2006
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    haha yeah they are. Im thiking that maybe its because we've spent so long away from each other and we had exams taking up the majority of the beginning of our relationship anyway, so its not been an easy ride! But I'm hoping things will sort themselves out!

  • rockchick247
    July 13, 2006
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    i hope it works out too! guys are so stupid sumtimes! nice poem and well said!

  • Momentaryhappiness
    July 13, 2006
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    Yeah so do i!


  • Fortune
    July 12, 2006
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    your poem comes across really well,and i can really feel what ur writing, nice poem, dont mean to be rude but u have peeps to talk to u about this like julie and stuff. hope the guy works it befor tis to late.

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