Songs fill your mind with words
But Music fills your soul
Music is a celebration
That fills an empty hole
Music takes you places
That you've never been
It guide you down a path
That's filled with a heavenly bliss
Each person takes a different path
That's the magic don't you see
I don't know what path you'll take
But I hope it leads you straight to me
Author notes
I love my Music, The oldies but goodies, 70's, 80's, And of coursw Country. This is dedicated to two hearts lost but soon to be found.
Written July 12th, 2006
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Very good poem.It flow beautifully. Great job i really enjoyed reading!
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good job
this poem had a very nice flow!!!!!!!!!!!! you can write poetry well!! i hope that you get many more comments on this poem because it /Rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my music is rock and roll!!! but you enjoy your music because it must be delightful like this here poem!!!!!
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WONDERFUL POEM
Ah yes Charlie, Music is what soothes the savage beast in us. This was an excellent write. The rhyming and flow were perfect.Thank you for sharing. From oldie but goodie to country, music is wonderful. Hope all is well my friend. God Bless you and stay safe. Hugs to you. Sandy 
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Yeah I could agree with this tons because i LOVE music. I could not live without it. lol this was an awesome piece! Simply brilliant! good luck with everything!
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A touch of Magic!
The magic of music...what a beautiful write. Music fills my soul so I can truly relate to this.
A wonderful expression!
debbie
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*hug* :) :f
In the first stanza don't you mean "music fills the hole"? Nice sentiments in this one my friend. 
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I love this poem. I love music, but never thought to write a poem about music. Incredible! Music does exactly what you have said. Its such a simple poem, no crazy giant words, but nonetheless eloquent. Its just a really cool write. I can feel your love for music. Keep on writing. If you have such talent to say this about music, I cant imagine what your lyrics and songs are like.
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A poet after my own heart. Another great write.
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amazed!
aww thats cute
I love your writing style, very simple but in depth. Emotions can be felt with each line that you expressed.
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Very nice! Maybe our paths will cross one day!
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hmm...I am not sure whether the path I took would make us on same plane or not. but, one thing I am sure about is that this is a definately good write. So, keep up, the gud work!
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excellent
This is great Charlie, isn't it something how music can take you places, fill miles of distance. Share you good taste in music and it sounds like these two hearts will soon join as one. How lucky they will be!
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a very inspiring message that like music; is meant to be heard over and over again. music is one of the few things in life that bring people together regardless of beliefs, age, social status or race and i commend you on this loving and beautifully written poem!!
be safe
lynn
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As music would be abled to guide us all. The world would be a much safer place I believe. But it is a fine piece of work you wrote here.
Keep penning
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great message you're sending out with this poem. I agree with you! I love oldies! You did a great job on this piece. Keep up the great work and keep on writing
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wonderful, i hope you all the best....
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awww so very pretty good poetry and hope these two hearts will soon be found god bless charlie take care mary
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