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Making Memories

Making memories

As I run my fingers down your spine
And touch your velvet skin
I知 harnessing your energy
For when I go back again


If I hold you long or squeeze you tight
Like I値l never let you go
I値l be trying to make more memories
For the days that I feel low

If I kiss you like it痴 the last
I知 savoring this sweet time
For if I missed a moment
It would be a crime

If I bask in your perfume
I知 just saving your sweet scent
I値l carry you in my heart
down those long roads that I知 sent

Author notes

I will make it home agian and this is my plan, At least for the time being.  Golly I she miss being with a women.  But it's only time that I have to conquer.
Written July 12th, 2006

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  • July 19, 2006
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    a lovely poem written from a tender and caring heart.
    your words are heartfelt and pure; it is a pleasure
    to read such a lovely poem written from a place of love.
    excellent writing! thank you for what you do and pls.
    stay safe.
    lynn


  • stylisthd
    July 15, 2006
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    very pretty poem loved it


  • mzladyt
    July 14, 2006
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    Sounds like you are a romantic at heart. Come home safely!!!

  • Eden Rain
    July 14, 2006
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    I like this, it flows nicely and is it so full of emotion. A great write, well done and stay safe.


  • andezia
    July 14, 2006
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    Such a sweetly written piece Your emotions shined through so well.
    keep it up!!

  • June-bug
    July 13, 2006
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    This is very lovely, Sounds like you have a wonderful plan for being with that special person.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 12, 2006
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    If I bask in your perfume
    I知 just saving your sweet scent
    I値l carry you in my heart
    down those long roads that I知 sent

    So heartfelt and so touching work indeed..


  • Kitesen
    July 12, 2006
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    I like this honest commitment. But be aware that it is not all barbarian in Iran. So behold the love for your beloved. Don't compare.
    It's a lovely poem hope to see more of you when you are abled to write some over there.

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