This rain tonight
Reminds me of you
Of us
But I'm okay
I've loved and lost
Grieved and now
I think I will be all right
I'm getting stronger
My body
My heart
They're healing
The scars are there
Because I will never forget
My first
True love
The first taste of
Deep heartache
You were my first
In many ways
First kiss in the rain
Dance under the stars
I can still feel the ache
When I see your picture
or hear our song
It happened last summer
And I never knew
One could love so deeply
This rain
Is cleansing
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Written July 12th, 2006
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O.K
Not that you should care, but I am one for upsetting people. You need to be more honest. I bet you would be harsher now, in what you would say. The rain should wash him out of your life.
P.s my opinion is not worth a light.
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Your Truth is always ...Beauty!
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Cleaning
Hopeful. Truthful. Emotions real and gives the reader a special insight into the artist's life/personality. I love your poetry I loved how this one flowed and how it was kept so simple but it ment so much.
Always there...
Deadsmelly~ -
Aaaw. This was soo good Ashley.
You're such a great writer. 
idk if you remember me. 
It's Tori. haha. buttt AMAZING JOB
Tori
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Even though you ignore me, I think this was really good.
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This is really good i really liked it alot
you have very well written poetry great stuff
keep it up -kevin -
Ashers! A touching piece of art! Wondeeeeeeeeeerful darlinnnnnnnnn Never forget, for it shall make you stronger inside! 
- Ryan
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