all this mumblejumble nonsense
random bullshit etc
lacking feeling emotion and giving none because of it
all i hear is blahblahblah
life keeps opening its goddamned mouth
with an "i told you so"
(shut up)
please write your name on this bullet
hopefully narcassism will kill us all because
all we do is talk talk talk
etc etc
name a list and list what you have to do
what you have to say
nothing at all except small talk
one syllable answers from small minds
like
i
love
you
i never question you but sometimes secondguess myself
your words never end with etc
no meaningless stutter that just so happens
to fall from your beautiful lips
while everyone pukes out a jigsaw puzzle of stupidities
random bullshit etc
small words from our small minds
can be bigger than the todo list of a housewife
or business man
or teenage girl
three small words
kick the hustlebustle of the trivial modernday world
the lists and etc that take over our lives
i love you
three big words
from two small minds
well, one small mind at least
lucky you... you don't live by the etcs and lists and misconception
all this mumblejumble nonsense
i love you so much
there is my five little-big words from my small mind
to your amazing one
Author notes
hmmm... i just wrote and this is what i came up with.
Written July 12th, 2006
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Superb
I like your stream of consciousness approch. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one. -
Small mind? Nah...don't think so. This is a great example of letting the muse free! I liked this mumblejumble!
Free-thinking, and intelligently penned.
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I liked this. It was surreal, a stream-of-though kind of mixed up feeling full of contradictions and bitterness. Quite enjoyable! Thank you for sharing!
Menecairiel -
I read it again and it makes sense now. I like it... nay. I love it. And I love you too. I do, however disagree with parts.
A. I really ain't as great as you make me sound
B. You're much more amazing than you make yourself sound. Much, much more. -
I read it again and it makes sense now. I like it... nay. I love it. And I love you too.
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one billion out of ten
WOW!, I had to read that four times to completely understand some of the words! haha. The poem itself was easy for me to understand though because I think like that all the time.I'm stupid. Anyways I thought it was really good, and it reminded me of how my mind wonders and never stops. Always thinking about stuff that doesnt really matter to me. I would give you all of my points for this poem but i dont know how..... (you will have to tell me how)
welp....i guess i will see you later gator!
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