You came for me.
I was broken,
torn,
Nothing to lose.
You gave me care,
love,
Everything I needed.
My wounds healed.
My heart fixed,
stolen.
You took it away.
Well, keep it,
hold it,
So I can heal you too.
Author notes
Option and picture 5 please.
Written July 11th, 2006
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Oh, very nice.
I just wasn't so fond of the last lines, it's too much like someone just talking.
It's excellent and simplistic, but has a very complex feel to it.
I think maybe getting rid of the "Well" and "So"
But that's just me
Great job <3 -
Very nice poem. Sweet, simple and to the point. It goes along well with the picture. Nice write!
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it's really well done. I love it. And it goes wonderfully with that picture. ^.^ Good luck in the contest. I hope you do well. This deserves it.
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