Wind howls in the night,
Maybe someday you’ll have woken up,
And Notice I am not there,
isn't something Missing?
Wolfs cry in the distance,
My Pain runs Deep,
Shuddering deep and I cry out,
am I the sacrifice?
Fading away to nothing,
I'd die to know you love me,
The Rain Mirrors the Tears in my eyes,
Am I that unimportant?
Come and Save me from the nothing,
But You won’t try for me,
I am all alone in the darkness,
Am I so insignificant?
You can't even see me,
I am Standing right next to you,
I am invisible to you,
You Can't even feel me when I touch you.
Author notes
This Poem was inspired by some Evanescence Songs. and yet It mirrors how I feel sometimes, that I am invisible. I feel this way about a guy. I wonder if he really cares, I find myself Falling for him but I am afraid. "Missing me -Evanescence"
"Option 4) Listen to any song by them and write me a poem on how it affected you. Let me feel the happiness, sadness, joy, pain. Just let it flow."
Written July 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Whatever You Want *chocies* by Nereida Nightshade.
300 points, ended July 25, 2006, 36 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Alone.....Prewrites allowed by LoveNeverDies.
370 points, ended May 17, 2007, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Music Inspired Poems by Empusa.
525 points, ended July 20, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I can hear you in a whisper, but you can't even hear me screaming........ by Carpe Noctem.
650 points, ended November 26, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
:(
mommy this is sad *hugs you tight as a little girl can*
-
Words like these tear at heart strings, maybe you could share them with him. Thank you for entering.
-
-
I have M'lady and he Knows and has Told me He Loves me
-
-
Good
-
-
-
Wow very creative. Sounds like it really came from the heart. I felt the same way with a ex boyfriend of mine so i know how you feel.
-
Wonderful
I love this. I can relate. I enjoyed the images and it flowed nicely. My favorite line is..
Wolfs cry in the distance,
My Pain runs Deep,
Shuddering deep and I cry out,
am I the sacrifice?
Deep and powerful. Keep it up!
-
wonderful
wow i know how you feel cause i feel it all the time but i know someone is watching out for me *smiles to her to herself* -
I Like it you done a great job.
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
