Anger coursing through my veins
At the intrustion you've so carelessly,
Thoughtlessly,
Gracefully made
This is my life
With no place for you in it
And if I just had my way
I swear
I'd be gone before you had the chance to wonder
What you said and did to hurt me like you have
And everyone sees
The skies would fall the day you stopped
And considered what someone else was feeling
Everyone sees
Nobody tells him
Because before he'd ever stop
And listen to his daughter
He'd listen to his wife
Well, I draw the line
When you start on about my mother
I don't need your advice
I don't need to become you,
A petty, rancid sack of lies
I wait for the day I no longer need endure
The vile condescension in your eyes
I am more
Than you ever could be
So eat up all the praise
And bask in all the light
Your skin will burn
I hope you choke
Author notes
Don't critically comment me, I'm just really angry, this isn't even a poem, I puked anger on my keyboard.
Written July 11th, 2006
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good
really well written.
-leah -
hm, very angry poem, Lauren. Written well though. i like, but you know me...and my brain's just gone so I can't think straight, but yeah. heh. Darn! Rose's already done the shooting
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very angsty, good venting, laur
*looks up and giggles*
You know that feeling when it's REALLY cold outside? That's what she'd be. ^_^ I would be a strawberry milkshake. And you would be peanut butter. =P
Hahaha "Does she have implants?" "She must... there's no way those are natural... there's a line that shouldn't be there!"
SUNDAYYY!!!! -
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shoots step mom in the crotch for you
Edited on Jul 11, 8:54 p.m. because ''. -
Haha. Thannnnks.
That was really just about my stepmom...she's just so....well...whatever, I've cooled off slightly now.
*shakes head* I'll tell you about it next time we talk, if you want. Sorry we keep missing each other too. <3 -
Your father. Is a fucking DUMBASS.
I love you. <3
Pee. Ess. shoots him in the groin for you
<3<3<3
♥
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