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Happy Birthday dear Jim

It was a long summer’s day
everyone was expecting
to see the birthday
of a little sun shining.

The birds began singing happily
llittle one looked around
now all could hear hopefully
everywhere the joy’s sound.

Jim was such a bliss
shedding light everywhere
everyone gave him a kiss
you could hear his laughter.

Still after thirty years
he’s a joy to us
every time my voice he hears
calls back” yes, my boss?”

Happy birthday dear brother and friend
May your happiness never meet an end.


Shahrzad
2006-06-30

Author notes

hi dear brother. I'm sure you don't mind the line"calls back” yes, my boss?” Just like to put a big smile on your face.
Wish you a wonderful birthday on July 14th.
allpoetry.com/poets/Starhiker
Written July 11th, 2006

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  • Vickie J
    August 2, 2006
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    I especially liked the ending-I pray that for him, too.
    Your good at these birthday poems-I can understand why he liked this so much.
    ~vj

  • Ir.muse
    July 16, 2006
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    Thank you dear afro. Nice to hear from you.

    Shahrzad


  • Abby100 Mann
    July 15, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL WRITE!!!

    This is a loveable piece of free form poem that delves on a dedication to a fellow poet Jim the star hiker.I know Jim would love this one.Fine job sister shahrzad as always.

  • Ir.muse
    July 14, 2006
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    You're the last one to comment on your birthday poem That's ok, I'll forgive you.
    You're very welcome. I can't forget my dear brother's birthday.

    Shahrzad


  • Starhiker
    July 14, 2006
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    Thank you so much for this birthday poem, Shahrzad. I am so honored. It is so nice to have such a loving AP-family. Wow. 32 years old! I am feeling so old... Thanks again for the poem, you deserve a big applause for it! Jim

  • Ir.muse
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you dear Sam. You're always so kind.

    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    July 13, 2006
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    wow...my dear sister, these are my lines:
    "every time my voice he hears
    calls back” yes, my boss?”"
    It means I'm his boss.
    Thank you.

    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you dear sister for your nice comment.

    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you dear sister.

    Shahrzad


  • wtchr
    July 12, 2006
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    This is a sweet and caring poem. Hope Jim has the happiest of birthdays. Your poem will certainly be a bright spot for him.

  • pozo
    July 12, 2006
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    Lovely flow here Keep writing, this was a beautifully hopeful tribute which I liked a lot I hope he likes it as much as I do
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Pozo


  • wings of an angel
    July 11, 2006
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    This is a very good write that you had penned here sis I am sure Jim will love this poem done for him your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully good luck in the contest

  • Ir.muse
    July 11, 2006
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    Thank you for your great comment I hope so.
    Love you

    Shahrzad


  • Shakari
    July 11, 2006
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    This piece is fantastic! You used a great metaphor at the beginning, your rhyming was fantastic, and you will bring a grin on to his face...I am sure! Keep up the great work dear!

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