You gave me reason to believe in you
you made my feelings come alive,
you showed me loving like I never knew
you gave me reason to survive.
When I am down you always comfort me
you show me laughter everywhere,
and for the first time in my life I see
a love that I can really share.
You have devoted all your life to me
you give me love beyond compare,
your tenderness and all your loyalty
are just one reason why I care.
You made a fire deep within me burn
and now I know we'll never part,
and all I'm offering you in return
is all the love that's in my heart.
Author notes
Written July 11th, 2006
serious clown
A contest entry
- Give Me Hope by Hopelessly Hopeful.
700 points, ended January 29, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - how much do u love them by wickedclown.
333 points, ended May 28, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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300 points, ended June 4, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TO BE LOVED by Whispering Wind.
900 points, ended January 21, 2008, 35 entries
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350 points, ended January 23, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I YEAR TOGETHER AND I STILL ADORE YOU by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 3, 2008, 42 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poetry Please by FallingTwilight.
390 points, ended April 16, 2008, 40 entries
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360 points, ended May 14, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
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450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
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550 points, ended November 8, 2008, 23 entries
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600 points, ended February 3, 16 entries
Honorable mention
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950 points, ended February 19, 58 entries
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490 points, ended April 22, 55 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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750 points, ended July 4, 103 entries
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400 points, ended July 30, 36 entries
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1500 points, ended September 18, 31 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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I enjoyed your poem well much. you painted a good picture about love. the loss of love and yearning for love.it was heartfelt and soulful, full of heart and emotion. i wish you well in my contest. good luck and i wish you in the coming days ahead.
I don't know it seems a bit plain even though its well written.
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Wow this is really excellent congratulations on all your trophys you earned them all. Great job. Love is so romantic like my husband once was. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read
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So sweet
Thank you for entering. THis is such a beautiful piece.
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WOW!!! This is a very beautiful write!! I LOVED IT!! Very good job!!! It was so romantic and meaningful... I see you have won a lot of trophies and you deserved every bit of them!! Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
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This is a beautiful poem and a wonderful tribute to the powers of true love. Great job, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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awh this is lovely
thanks for entering
great write
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ahh. such a sweet love poem, I can why it has won so many trophies. It is wonderful.
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Beautifully written; love the rhyme. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck,
-Kaitlyn
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this is really good. i liked the rhyming, which that is actually my favorite type of poetry. Great write and good luck in the contest
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Yes. this is perfect
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This reminds me of me and my bf. I love it!
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Such beautiful words flowing from your pen. Pulls a sigh from deep within thank you so much for sharing and entering
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"You made a fire deep within me burn
and now I know we'll never part
and all I'm offering you in return
is all the love that's in my heart. "
Who could ask for more?
This is a deep, emotional, tender loving piece of work.
Good luck inthe contest.
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I like the happy feeling this gives me. Thank you!
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Beautiful! Thanks for entering!
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thanks... i needed to read this just now.
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This is oh so sweet. I really liked it a lot. Thanks so much for entering and following the rules! Good luck!
Love always,
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this very is beautiful oh i loved it thank you for entering
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beautiful poem!
thank you for entering my contest and good luck -
Thankyou for your lovely entry, Bella
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I see yu've won gold with this. congratulations. It's good and rhymes well. The story is sweet too. Thank for entering it in my contest too.
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Super poem! Congratulations on the trophy, a very worth winner. sj
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OMG This is so lovely!
OMG This is so lovely! this is just so perfect - exactly what I want to say to Mathew! Mind you, there are so many other poems here that I want to read to him too - I'll be there forever
The wedding party will be asleep!
Thanks so much for entering such a beautiful write and good luck!
Blissful Princess
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This is great. Thanks for the entry into the contest. I know this will mean a lot to her. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much for the comments,it is appreciated and good luck with the contest, best wishes---Norman
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Truly excellent heartfelt poem. You are a poet who holds nothing back and it really is a pleasure to read your work.
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wow, this is amasing, easy to read and flows increadibly well, your emotions come through clearly.
brilliant write
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your poems are great they really tell the message!
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this is truely excellent job !! i just love the write !!
yours always
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very beautiful. smooth rhymes with a beautiful message.
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I liked this poem but to me it brings thoughts of my mother to my mind. I liked that you followed the rules thank you very much for that. you used good laguage nothing too off cast but alot of literal speaking which is always a plus in poetry. I liked it alot but you need more figurative language.
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