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Falling Smiles



I cant pinpoint  a single person
That I would want to see smile
But what I would love
Is to see the world happy
That would make it all worth while
        ......
No wars or disagreements
No starving and no poor
No suffering of our animals
All this makes my heart sore
        ......
But this is just a pipe dream
And I wish it was not so
To cleans the world of  unhappiness
We have a long way to go
        ......
So what can I do
To have a smiling chain reaction
Paint my face like a clown
Now that would be an attraction
        ......
No, I know to start my quest
It is to all readers on AP
I send you all a hug
For each of you to receive
To travel through cyber space
Like stardust  floating  freestyle
And land on needed faces
Giving them the biggest smile
It will not stop the anguish
It will not cleans the world
But perhaps it will settle on a starving mother
And  her smile make her children’s lips curl.






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Written July 11th, 2006

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  • princesspaige
    August 15, 2006
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    That was lovely Nanna... i love it keep up the great work!!!!


  • little-hug
    July 18, 2006
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    Aww this is very beautiful and sincere Nanna Barbara It is very caring and heartfelt ♥ It touched my heart and your hugs are always the best !! I love how it rhymes and flows too and the gentle language you use in the poem. It is so sweet thank you lots for entering
    lots of love
    ellie x


  • skyviewexpress
    July 12, 2006
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    Very enjoyable poem! I love how you related everything together in this poem!! good luck in the contest *we may be in trouble* lol


  • Truthful Princess
    July 12, 2006
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    lovely

    Aunty! This is so sweet! I loved it!But don't ever paint your face like a clown it would make me cry, They scare me to death. They actually scare a lot of people.hehe! Well I wanted to say I love you for you are the bestest and you are an awesome poet, who just wrote a really sweet poem..hehe.


  • July 11, 2006
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    terrific

    Ah This is so touching dear poet. A wonderfully constucted poem of very deep emotional sentiments. You certainly have a gift of words my dear friend. Your caring certainly shows your high intelligence and your wonderful poetic style. Always God Bless--


  • XxMissundastoodxX
    July 11, 2006
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    That was lovely, and I did recieve your hug just as i'm sure everyone else that reads this will, you have a big heart Libra, thank-you for sharing it, Mareta...

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