With tears in her eyes
she waves goodbye
her wings are broken
and she can no longer fly
for once your heart is broken
everything is gone
She watches from a distance
as her love sleeps in bed
so peaceful and calm
such beauty, such pride
She waves goodbye and kisses him
gently one last time
then away she goes never
to come back......
But it's not the ending
indeed it's not
the guardian angel
it's not yet gone
for even though he said he didn't
want her, shell still watch
his back. She will still do
her best to keep his happiness alive
but this time she knows that
she'll get nothing in return
there will be no payback
I am your guardian angel
watching from far away
when ever you want me back
I'll be here and I'll stay
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Written July 11th, 2006
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Sad Latina i read Am Still Your Guardian Angel I through III and i have to say that i loved them. It was so beautiful and sad and if it's true then i am so sorry for what happened. I know how it feels to love and not be loved. Are you going to keep writing Am Still Your Guardina Angel or is this your last one? I'd like to know because i really liked all of them. Keep up the good work. I love the way you write. Emily
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Patience15
Thanks you so much for the commetn....u makin me blush....sry it took 4ever 2 write back but i havent been log in much ...well i dont really knoe if i will write more it depends if i get inspire
but dont worry i promise if i do it will be a good one
thanks again
much love
~*Sad Latina*~
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thsnk u
u make me feel so special
thank u so much for the comment and for checkin my work
love ya
hope we can talk soon
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I love this poem...and i also loved the other 2 before this one..but no surprise there i always love your writes...well ne way...nice work..i cant wait to read more of you work
Luv always~ katie
o by the way i switched names....ttyl -
hee hee
thanks , really htank you for the comment
and the fact that you took time to read my work
~*BB*~
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aww your comment makes me blush
I knoe wud you mean, its sucks how we can give someone so much yeat we get so little or nothin it returns , but hey maybe some day we'll find someone who sees our efforts
thanks for the comment, am very very happy
I'll be checking your work very soon
~*BB*~
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thanks for the reply am very happy you liked it
sorry i reply so late
I really really appreciate your comment
~*BB*~
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I remember this feeling..yep..the one where you hurt sooo much it becomes hard to breath!!! yep i know that feeling all too well!!
once again.. i feel your pain
much love
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This is sumptuous spiritual poetry.
Even though the rhyme scheme isn't prevalent throughout the poem, it has lyricism that lingers. It also speaks of the relationship of the self with the Higher Self. One can almost see the guardian angel nursing her broken wings, looking with longing in her eyes at the person who's asleep in the poem. Good work. Keep it up dear. And thanks for such wonderful poetry. -
brill
wOW!!!! THis was a truly great piece, it was just great how you styled the poem and it never really stopped or sounded wrong! I personally loved it! You should be proud!!! Hayley x -
This was really great...you did a great job on it!!!
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simople it is indeed ..but simplicity of words doesnot mean that your poem may be lacking in depth .. its the idea and the emotional stimulus that really generates a poem .. i kind of liked your poem ..it is quite smooth and original
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I'm afraid this one just didn't quite work for me, sorry. Although it has a great deal of emotive sincerity in it, it is just too simplistic for me. It seems to me that you can't take a subtle, charming, author-omniscient voice and then add that you've "got your back." The latter is simple street slang that doesn't fit at all with the rest of what you're trying to do. - oce
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very cute!
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This is a really nice metaphor for someone who gives and gives and gets nothing back. I can relate a little bit at times I feel like I give 110% at my job but no one else cares and I get no reward for my efforts. This is a really nice write, keep them coming
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NICE WORK ON THIS
BEAUTIFULL PIECE I LOVED IT
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