(This one isn't that good)
Sorrow fills my heart
Cuts fill my body
Tear fill my eyes
Fake smiles fill my lips
Lies fill my words
Fake laughs fill my voice
Lies fill my ears
A blade fills my hands
The smell of death fills my nose
Suicide fills my mind
Pain fills everywhere........
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Written July 10th, 2006
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I think this poem is really good! Just needs a bit of punctuation, and some grammatical changes. I'd be happy to help out, since I enjoyed this poem!
Keep the ink flowing, dearest poet, and thank you for sharing this with us all.
SufferingFool
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