Brian is someone,
someone very special in my life.
First we were brothers,
and now we're father and son.
Brian is someone,
we should all strive to be like.
So selfless and caring,
so kind and loving.
He is so wonderful to all,
always kind and encouraging.
Whenever I have a conflict,
I know I can turn to Brian.
It is nice that I've met,
such a lovely and sweet soul,
I'll always treasure my friendship,
with my great father Brian.
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Written July 10th, 2006
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so true
omg thats so cute and cool brian sorta changed my life to he realy is a great person
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Indeed it is. Thanx for your comment. We really haven't talked much, so it's good to hear from you. Thanx again.
~Evan~
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Mega cool poem for a mega brilliant person. He's my AP Dad too I like the way you wrote this and I reckon it is all true too
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Dyl -
Thank you.
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Thanks for entering Evan. Wow! We've entered each other's contests. Good luck, son.
Love your Dad, Brian -
Thank you.
Never stop being you!
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Beautiful.
Beautiful and heartfelt words. This is a wonderful poem that portays meaning very well.
Well done.
Rev. Alimae -
You've done a lot for me too Evan. Just by being yourself.
Someone who's loving, gifted and dedicated to being a friend to others. Never lose that, son. Treasure it always.
God bless you.
Your Dad Brian -
It was my pleasure to write this, Brian, after what you've done for me. You're a true inspiration in my life. I love you so much.
Your son,
~Evan~
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VERY GOOD!
This is great, Evan. You are the best son anyone could ask for. You're a blessing. Thanks so much for writing this.
Entering this in the contest in place of the other I think would be more significant since it's more up to date. Anyway thanks again, son. I love you with all my heart.
Your Dad Brian
Edited on Jul 10, 8:46 p.m. because ''.
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