Incomplete describes me
Sadness overcomes me
Hatred consumes me
I am lost
My spirit is an enigma
My words are an expression
My thoughts are an epitaph
I am lost
Fear grows inside me
Love falls beneath me
Hope floats above me
I am lost
In the darkness he comes for me
In my heart he rescues me
In my mind he calms me
I am found
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Written July 10th, 2006
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I like this. It shows so much hope for those of us who are searching.
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Good write, I like it. Its short but it tells a story that takes a long time too acomplish. Good job.
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Lovely write great emotions love the ending
thank you for sharing
thank you for your comment on my poem
do read some more and i will read yours off to bed now it's late here 00:00 so sleep calls
bye for now -
good poem it seems as if you put alot of thought into it
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I enjoyed this...Im glad you were found!!!
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That is a fucking great piece right there. I feel the same way. I hate Age.
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