The taste of salty tears streaming down my cheeks remind me of you.
I don't know anything anymore, my life has complexed since this burden.
You seem to not know what went wrong with "us"
I know exactly the cure
we should leave this behind us, start over new.
With someone understanding, like ourselves.
Not another opposite who doesn't understand.
This should end right now, but we keep on pushing the blade in deeper.
There is no going back now, it will never be the same.
I know now that there's no one to truly blame.
Maybe we didn't try hard enough, or maybe we didn't want to.
The complications of a long distance relationship have crushed me to pieces
I love you but i want to move on, start brand new.
With one last kiss, and a sweet goodbye.
I Love you, I hate you, and I don't know why.
I'm not sure what went wrong.
But this will be our end.
Author notes
take it as you see it. Its about exactly what you think. no one cheated on anyone. its just this beautiful thing called love, dying.
Written July 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Breath of Fresh Air by Virgoan.
450 points, ended December 20, 2006, 50 entries
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A very good story in this poem foretold. Nice work!
Lines worth remembering:
The taste of salty tears streaming down my cheeks remind me of you.
I don't know anything anymore, my life has complexed since this burden
Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing.
---"I don't know what to say. Do read my mind."---VIRGOAN
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