Without the skin here
Beneath the soul
I have no where to begin
I am weightless
It shouldn't matter
how thick space gets
I am continuous
Faster than light beats
Is a heart that yearns
to explore another
dimension of the dome
Return to the galaxy
The Universe is my home
And without the skin here
Above the bone
My essence is paralyzed
without rhythm and tone
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oooooooooooooo reallly interesting i like!!, You mightneed to change the colour of yewr words tho :S xzx
overall- amazing
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that really good. it was a little hard to read at first but i managed. good write
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Nice poem, but try to coordinate the colors on the page better. It's hard to read.
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I really like this is one. Great write
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Well thank you very very very very much!
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very very very very very very very nice poem. i like it alot......... um ok bye then!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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