Little brother, sweet as can be,
Can you remember way back when you were three?
When we were samll,
Oh maybe about this tall?
Oh, how I remember,
Your curls that September,
Wearing my Sunday Dress,
And mom's make-up, What a mess.
The Best of all,
Was in the fall.
The leaves falling down,
We never had a frown.
For we would sit out on the stoop,
And brew our favorite leaf soup.
Then try to feed it to Mom and Dad,
They always sat it was the best they ever had.
Remember way back when I was ten?
We didn't have a care back then.
Memories they make me smile,
Lets sit and reminisce awhile.
Author notes
Hope this piece makes you remember about all the good times you have had when you were little. Hope it makes you smile.
Written March 30th, 2003
A contest entry
- Cheer me up - Please! by rufina caraid.
250 points, ended April 6, 2003, 6 entries
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hey
i like this poem. it definatley made me think of the good times that i have with my little brother. we have always been close and have adventures together, even though we aren;t so little anymore. thanks for sharing. and thanks for commenting on my poem as well, i appreciate it.
take care,
mollie
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Great!
Awe, what a cute write
It brought a smile to my face as well! I liked it very muc
Great write!
James
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That was sweet and very enterting...good write
~Monkey~ -
haha Aww that was sooo cute!! great write, I hpe that cheered you up, too, Gemini
luv
bebe -
Thank Staci - yet it made me smile. My sister and I used to 'cook' out in the back garden and give it to Mom or Dad whoever happened to be our victim at the time. Parents put up with such a lot
Thank you for entering.
Regards, ~Von~
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