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Take My Breath Away

Twirling tongue tantalizes,
An aching anticipation.
Kneeling, [your] knowledge keeps
Exciting. Experience every

Moment.  Make my
Yearning yours. Yes,

Breathe baby, beg,
Relentlessly ravishing.  Ride
Each euphoric enticement.
Accept again, [my] arousal.
Teasing, taunting, touching,
Higher.  Helpless, heat

Accelerates, arousing all [our]
Wild ways.  With
Amazement and awe, [I]
Yelp, yearning [as] you

Take My Breath Away

Author notes

Title per Berlin

I have a habit of taking song titles and creating acrostics.  I was challenged as to whether or not I can make most, if not all words fit the approprite letters.  And so this is what came out.  I know, may not make a bunch of sense, but I tried.
Written July 10th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 15, 2006
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    What was I supposed to warn you about? Hmmm??


    You know how I write. I figured it was an enter at your own risk thingy, lol.

    Thanks for the comments hun
    Storm

  • HurricaneJay
    July 15, 2006
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    Whoa-ho. Now that was steamy. Different, but cool. Like the, uh, flow here. Interesting.
    You didn't warn me about your writing, just a few others. Wow.
    -Jay

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 11, 2006
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    Thanks for reading and commenting, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • suicidal-dramaqueen
    July 11, 2006
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    I think you did an awsome job with this. I think its cool you try to make poems out if song titles. Keep it up!

    ~*~Suicidal-dramaqueen~*~

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 10, 2006
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    Thank you for your comments, appreciate it.

    Storm
  • Casanovagirl007
    July 10, 2006
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    Loved it. You write very well. I can picture it in my mind.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 10, 2006
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    Thank you, appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • XwasteOFpaintX
    July 10, 2006
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    wow i loved this!! it was gorgeous, and the background really added to it.
    very sexy but pretty.
    -waste
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