Twirling tongue tantalizes,
An aching anticipation.
Kneeling, [your] knowledge keeps
Exciting. Experience every
Moment. Make my
Yearning yours. Yes,
Breathe baby, beg,
Relentlessly ravishing. Ride
Each euphoric enticement.
Accept again, [my] arousal.
Teasing, taunting, touching,
Higher. Helpless, heat
Accelerates, arousing all [our]
Wild ways. With
Amazement and awe, [I]
Yelp, yearning [as] you
Take My Breath Away
Author notes
Title per Berlin
I have a habit of taking song titles and creating acrostics. I was challenged as to whether or not I can make most, if not all words fit the approprite letters. And so this is what came out. I know, may not make a bunch of sense, but I tried.
Written July 10th, 2006
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What was I supposed to warn you about? Hmmm??
You know how I write. I figured it was an enter at your own risk thingy, lol.
Thanks for the comments hun
Storm -
Whoa-ho. Now that was steamy. Different, but cool. Like the, uh, flow here. Interesting.
You didn't warn me about your writing, just a few others. Wow.
-Jay -
Thanks for reading and commenting, appreciate it.
Storm -
I think you did an awsome job with this. I think its cool you try to make poems out if song titles. Keep it up!
~*~Suicidal-dramaqueen~*~ -
Thank you for your comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
Loved it. You write very well. I can picture it in my mind.
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Thank you, appreciate your comments.
Storm -
wow i loved this!! it was gorgeous, and the background really added to it.
very sexy but pretty.
-waste
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