I hate it when you ignore me,
Or when you make me cry.
I hate it when you think your right,
Or even look me in the eye.
I hate it when you use big words,
But then apologize right away.
I hate it when you lecture me,
But then always have a point.
I hate the way you see yourself,
And not how others see.
I hate the way you think your so smart,
Yet dont take the time to get the facts.
But most of all,
I hate what you do to me.
I hate the way your so nice to me,
And how you say Im so great.
I hate how much you know me,
Even tho I never told.
I hate how you dont hate me.
And how you probably, never will.....
Author notes
I read some poems about love, and watched 10 things I hate about you. I love that movie...yet this is the one thing that stuck with me....
Written March 30th, 2003
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Great poem
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first thing right off the bat, i would put these into stanzas to make it easier to read. the repitition was good. i liked that. i like the subject that was written on and i agree with jinxbikes, it does sound like ten things i hate about you, and then i read your authors comments, obviously it is alittle bit from ten things i hate about you. good job.
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Good
Isn't this, if i'm not mistaken, in the movie '10 things i hate about you'? To me this sounds a lot like the poem she recites in class? If not, i'm sorry. Other wise it was good.
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