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Nature Goes To War

a cloak of darkness sheaths the sun
an angry Norse god utters a war cry
as weapons clash in day-like sparks of light
the earth's scent of fright rises high
clear blood from heavens revive all that is dry

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Written July 10th, 2006

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  • MaaiL
    August 19, 2006
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    EEEXXXCCCEEELLLEEENNNTTT!!!

    LOVELY! MY GR8 FRND! I JUSS WAS ABT TO CRY... M SO HAPPY U JOINED AP!
    ***ShamZ***


  • Samyuktha P.C.
    July 11, 2006
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    Like xLB I say this deserves a big applause.. you are an amazing poet.. love sam


  • wings of an angel
    July 11, 2006
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    This is a very good write that you had penned here your rhythm flowed nicely throughtout the whole poem


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 10, 2006
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    This is amazing - so graphically worded and wonderful. Deserving of an applause... x LB

  • theslayer
    July 10, 2006
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    Awesome!

    Clear Blood???? Whoa.. that is one awesomeely awesome way to describe rain... Whoa again.. Rock on dude!

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