Searching forever for answers
Don't stray far from me
Craving for a straight answer
I see the light ahead of me
It's in my eyes, in my mind
Holding on to a falling star
There's no turning back now
Screaming out for what's not in reach
Observing the light in my eyes
The truth is held within my mind
Author notes
A missing pieces... piece.
From the original contest...
1. Get a poem you like
2. Delete every other line in that poem
3. Put it in the contest for me to read and judge
4. Congratulations you just made a MISSING PIECES POEM!
In a list
- trophy 1 - gold • next in list
- written for contests • next in list
- 1-10 • next in list
- rhyme: none • next in list
- form: missing pieces • next in list
A contest entry
- Missing Pieces by Flame-in Lesbian.
300 points, ended August 1, 2006, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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what form???read the rules...
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The form is explained in the author notes. I read the rules, did you?
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I know the piece that this was taken from, and you have created an even more beautiful poem. This piece now stands out on its own, regardless of where it originated from. Awesome.
Yours in awe,
Kain
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The only place to find Truth is via the Lord! Your soul will be empty without Him! Although I am a fervent Christian (are YOU saved for the Christ by the way? if you need any spirtual guidance please dont hesitate to ask me) I also feel that people may be able to contact us mortals even after they have passed over, provided of course they go to Heaven as saved souls, because if they are not saved they go to Hell where they will be far too busy being tortured 24/7 to have time to write poetry. Please come read some of my poems.
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I'm sorry, but what you said in your comment has absolutely nothing to do with my poem. I do not like being preached at. You won't gain any respect going about like that, and certainly won't give Christians a good name.
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Christinas dont care if they have a good name or a bad name! They only care about going to Heaven and watching sinners suffer from a grandstand seat! Yeeha!
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It amazes me that there is a bright light in the eyes of all that I have ever encountered. I believe it is the flame of the soul. That's what your poem speaks in my spirit. There is a light in even the darkest place, even the most morbid person, even in the blackness of night, there is a light. What a wonder you have mused, making me think in volumes.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Let the light come to us from everyside
Veda
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WOW!!!!!! Short, but yet powerful! amazing job with this piece! I love it!
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This is really good, I love the third stanza the most, to me it held the most power. Your words are very descriptive and I love that.
Great poem
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