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Welcome to Reality

A sudden shock

A sudden drop

A spotlight

And theater props

The crowd goes wild

The drums roll

As down the rope

She takes her stroll

This little show

Plays in her mind

Day by day

The chill runs down her spine

In her head

The screams keep to it

Pushing her

"Come on and do it!"

Off the rope

And in the air

Its just an act

No one cares

They cut the rope

And sweep off the stage

They do not acknoledge

Till they burn the sage

The crowd is shocked

Was this for real?

Was the point of the show

"Lives to steal"

Driven to insanity

This is not a show

Ladies and gentlemen

This is reality, So

Pull up a chair

Sip on your beer

Smoke on a cigar

And taste this girls tears

Heaven forbid

You remember her fate

Pay attention to the quiet ones

Before its too late

So drink your brandy

And walk away

As if nothing happened

This fateful day

You drove her to insanity

And you drink away the memory

And if you dont

Welcome to Reality.

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Written July 10th, 2006

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  • Mascaraed Beauty
    July 26, 2006
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    Holly this is really cool! GREAT, GREAT flow. I loveeed!

    -- M a s c a r a e d B e a u t y.


  • As black as ice
    July 14, 2006
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    wow n kool
    this is well gdd lol can i have sex with u no lol


  • bloody69angel
    July 11, 2006
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    Wow! That was like so awsome. You are such a great and inspirational writer. I really have become really fond of your work. I think it is wonderful in every way. Well don't ever stop writing, you are such a wonderful poet, and I believe your poems could be really big. keep the poetry dreams alive, and let me know if you get any new poems and i'll be sure to comment them as well


  • Shadow Rule
    July 10, 2006
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    Hay Mystical i read this on MySpace first lol but it's here to so kooly and it's a great poem like always.

    xx Shadow xx