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Disconsolation

thoughts and words so far away
push today just out of view
I can't help just how I feel
it's really nothing new

beautiful to broken eyes
the lies that feed the soul
long for that you do not want
and hunt to fill the hole

minutes, hours stumbling by
so why not just give in
once more, not like it is new
that few will rise again

Author notes

Thoughts on the limitations of the mortal life...
Written February 1st, 2006

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