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Words for my daughter

I wish I could talk to you, for I have so much to say.
I would tell you what you mean to me.
I will always be with you, I have not gone away,
I love you with all my heart, Even more today.

You are my child, and you are my soul.
Please, do not cry for me.
Know that I am watching over you.
Be happy for me, know we shall be together again.

Live your life to the fullest.
I would never want anything less for you.
All I have ever done was for you, my daughter.
I am here now, and will be near anytime you need.

Never will you be alone, for in your heart I am.
If you listen close enough, you will hear me.
Listen to my laughter when you are happy,
hear my sorrow when you are sad.

Feel my kisses upon your head while you sleep.
Love me daughter and my memories will never fade away.
Know I'm always there for you, feel my love so near.
I'm here waiting for you, together we will be again someday.

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Grief and sorrow are so heart wretching. I tried to say what I would want my child to hear. I lost my Daddy March 9th quite suddenly and I empathize for Debby.
Written July 9th, 2006

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    April 22, 2007

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    So wonderful a write and I hope the two of you gets close again for there are things only a mother can tell a daughter that she needs to know


  • theothersideofme
    August 18, 2006
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    I actually wrote it for another lady who's Mother passed. Thank you for your kind words and applause. My sympathy for the loss of your Mother.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 16, 2006
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    Thank you for witing this lovely poem you wrote it for your daughter but its like my mom that has passed is talking to me to . heaven works in mysterious ways but love shines for us all

  • theothersideofme
    August 2, 2006
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    i couldn't agree more!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 31, 2006
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    your loved ones are never far away . They are pulled back into aur world with memories and in every mirror you pass . lISTEN
    CLOSELY for they whispers you only have to stop long enough for them to say what they want you to hear . They love you and are forever near


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    July 11, 2006
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    Yes, this brings me great comfort. My mother always thought of others first. She prepared me..still, I was not ready to let her go. She will be with me always. Her legacy will live and love on. God Bless you. Thankyou so much for this beautiful piece. Love debby


  • BonnieQ silver member
    July 9, 2006
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    Perfect

    Oh, this is piece is so exquisite, words that I feel Debby's Mom would say to her; for Debby mentioned that, while her Mom had no fear of dying and knew she was, she was concerned for Debby and the rest of her family. I can just hear these words being spoken to Debby; this will give her great comfort.

    Love and hugs, B♥nnieQ


  • thelordreigns gold member
    July 9, 2006
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    This is so very beautiful. I love my Mom a long time ago - when I was 15 - but I can hear her voice to me in this beautiful poem. I know Debby will find comfort. God bless you. - joanne

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