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My lover

When the sky is dawn
And when I accompanied be only my shadow
I call for you
You, the one that protects me
The one that makes me feel more human
But in tears I give for the one I love
For I can not give one joy and satifiance
I pray for that day to heal a lover
And when that day comes I'll know that I had brought you loyalty
For I never repay my debts.

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Written July 9th, 2006

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  • MsFuture
    July 9, 2006
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    Whoa, that was real deep. I love it, it so touching and real good job.