So Saith the Lord
See the sun rise and know that the Lord hears,
In thine own heart I AM weeps o'er thy pain.
Still, thy Lord rejoices for thy Mother,
Taking His daughter for rest she has gained;
Elusive freedom no longer a dream,
Released of illness once a prison bane.
Do you not know I have spared thy Mother,
Even from the terrors of these end days?
Be at peace, My child, and for her rejoice:
By her faith she has walked in her Lord's ways.
Yea, the day soon will come when she shall rise,
Safe in Christ's arms; eternal life her pay.
Mourn not, for thy Mother still lives yet sleeps,
Infused with love, that Satan's spite be staved.
Let go and build up thine own compliance:
Else thine foe plans to thrust his brutal blades,
Set to harm and twist thee, that Christ might fade.
acrostic ©copyright 2006 Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C.
to Debby Sorenson and family in memory of their Mother
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Dearest Sis, may you and your family be filled with God's
strength and peace. This flesh is here for you, as God is there
with you by His Holy Spirit. My love, prayers and thoughts
are of and for you and your family during this trial of loss.
SisB♥n
Author notes
Written July 9th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Debbysmiles Hour of Grief by Arrant Faith.
300 points, ended July 24, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful
Bonnie, this is a beautiful piece of upbuilding Acrostic poetry, filled with hope and love! I am sure it will have given Debbie and her family comfort and support at a time when it was most needed.
~Katie~
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Oh Bonnie.. thankyou so much dear sister. I am crying but there is still joy. She is free and she is safe.. and I will someday see her again. I love you.. thankyou. Love debby
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Sorry about the loss
I liked your use of sibilance and alliteration here
Keep writing, this was a great blank verse acrostic
Quite a spiritual piece too
Best wishes
Pozo
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Beautiful.
Pretty. I am sorry for the loss...but this I hope brings comfort, for we the living mourn not the one whom has passed, but the emptiness left behind without them.
Lovely Mom!
-James.
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Perfect
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This is beautiful Bonnie and will bring great comfort. Love and hugs
- joanne
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lovely
Just sings to the heart. This will be a great comfort to Debbie and was so sweet of you to write. It is filled with truth and hope and love of our Savior and His children.
hugs WolfHeart
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