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My Heart Hurts With Yours

/My dear friend, the news you gave this morning,
was such a terrible shock,
My heartbreak was immediate
For you and your loss,
No parent should be put
in the position to loose a child,
No child should ever hurt so badly
they take their life!
I know how dearly you loved him, my friend
He was a handsome man!
A Mother’s Pride
I weep for his pain
More so My dear one,
I HURT
For your Pain and your loss!
Please see this allows God to show HIS strength
While HE will carry you to any lengths.
Right now my dear my prayer for YOU,
Let the Heavenly Father Love you,
Carry you tenderly in his arms
Loving you tending to you as a father would
As you have loved so many others
Now tis time to allow them to reciprocate that love
As we all reluctantly give the pain we feel
To Our Heavenly Father looking down
From above
/
Gary Hurst © 2006

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Written July 9th, 2006

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    September 16, 2006
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    Gorgeous piece of heart Gary. There is so much love pouring from this piece, you can feel it. Death is never easy to face, but when it is a child, the grief seems to intensify. Blessings, Gypsy


  • July 9, 2006
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    gary, my heart breaks for your friends loss, as well as yours, beautifully written. love you