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lovepoem

'My Goddess', you say
Our gazes meet, intangibly
And we are
Laughing like the
Drip, drip, drip
Of secrets
And you are
But words away
Sentiments in binary
Over telephone wires
Love sounds
Like nothing else
And I am
But worlds away

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Eh, this is something rather personal to me. But that which made it is dissolved and dissillusioned. I'm not the person I once was. And I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not, to be honest.
Written July 9th, 2006

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  • JazzALTernative silver member
    July 25, 2006
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    Of the highest quality

    This is an excellent poem - written in truncated verse - like the feelings as they are revealed. I would send this to someone if I had the opportunity. The opening question is strong as the second in repose. The goings in and out of cyberworld into that of flesh and bones was handled in a pure way - not tainted, but affected.